TASK 4
but after his friend decided to buy the house这句最好加上a couple of years after ... 跟听力保持一致
TASK 5
这个结构能把时间省下来给后面的建议腾出足够的至少30秒时间。不错。
study is the most important work(去掉)
第二点的最后部分,应该是想表达“向领导解释,领导会理解他的决定”,可能一时没想到“manager/boss”的表达,于是part-time job重复,这算是一点瑕疵吧。总的来说,还是比较好明白的。
TASK 6
the road set as barriers --> the road serves as barriers