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[url=]Main body :doing the thing like to do can have a happy life i.e.爱哥;do the things better ,realize one’s life value; Doing the things they should do can be more manageable; Are the same things benefits other people as well as oneself. Text :   Nowadays an increasing number of people do things they like to do and ignore the things they should do. Some think that humans are in society that is we have to communicate with others every day ,so we can’t have our full swings because these might disturb or even hurt other people around us. But not all people share the same ideas,in their views limiting ourselves too much will affect our potential and have nothing in one. As far as I can concern,we should do more things we enjoy to do rather than we should do.     The main reason is that doing the things these we enjoy will bring us the joyful life,because we can feel the pleasure from it,which attests the old saying “who is having fun,who is the winner.”What’s more,we tend to do the things we love better than we should.And in this way we can realize value of our life.For example, Einstein was charmed with physics so much that he devoted his life to it.He once said :I could feel the beautiful music melody in that abstract physical word.But when he was a young boy,he should stay at school and attend classes everyday like his peers,however he hated to the rigid school system and obeyed his inner desire ,so he did the things he loved to do,always stayed at library acquiring knowledge or in the laboratory testing the laws in the textbooks.At last he became one of the greatest physicists in the history.     Admittedly,people who always doing the things are easier to be managed.That is if someone only do what others command and catered to them entirely without his own passion or even didn’t know his expertise ,then that one can be an easygoing guy in people’s minds and won’t stir up trouble ,but he will never be happy indeed and don’t realize his value from the point of his own view.       If the things we should do are precisely the things we enjoy ,then in this circumstances we can benefit other people as well as ourselves,which is a perfect thing.
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