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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

开头段写法指导
1. 同意转换愿命题并解释原因，指出研究主要城市的合理性
2.解释原因时，提到了三个典型现象，为主旨句做铺垫
2. 给出主旨句，点明后文要讨论的三个方面

To understand the modern society and investigate its most prominent features, we should definitely focus our attention on its major cities because the major cities usually develop models and patterns that would be copied or imitated by other cities, counties and rural areas through institutions such as patent, chain stores and organisational learning. I would illustrate my position through discussing three major aspects of a society: the use of technologies, the retail industry and higher education.

中间第一段写法指导

1. 照应主旨句的第一个方面，引出“科技”
2. 指出只在大城市做调查，便可折射出社会中“科技”的潮流。
3. 列举电子支付的例子
4. 总结本段，在高科技产品使用情况上来讲，大城市居民很适合作为调查对象
There is no doubt that, to understand a society, we need to look into how technologies are used among the people. To do that, we only need to do research in major cities. For example, if we want to investigate how people use electronic devices to make payments, we should observe people in the major cities and interview them about their preferences and perceptions of the technology. Since the e-payment system usually involves patented technologies that can be transferred to other areas, the patterns of customer behaviours observed in major cities will be found in smaller cities, counties and even rural areas sooner or later. In the area of technology usage, people living in major cities can serve as suitable subjects for case studies.

中间第二段写法指导

1. 照应主旨句第二个方面，引出“零售产业”
2. 结构与中间第一段类似，指出大城市的零售业运营状况可推及整个社会
3. 将零售业具体到连锁店
4. 并列举Louis Vuitton的案例
5. LV经营模式可借鉴之处
Another important characteristic of modern society is the development of retail industry, i.e. how consumer products are marketed and sold. Again, we only need to study the major cities to understand how retail industry works. One of the major institutions in retail industry is chain store through which major brand name corporations sell their products in similar ways around the world. To know how Louis Vuitton promotes its products, there is no need to travel to different places all over the world. Just visiting the main shops in a few major cities, we will have a basic idea of the marketing strategies of the company.
To save costs in operation, companies like LV would reuse their ideas for promoting products in other areas.

中间第三段写法指导
1. 引出“高等教育”这一主题，与主旨句第三部分照应
2. 解释大城市典型高校可作为研究对象推及其他高校的合理性
3. 具体讲交流项目和访问学者是了解典型高校的途径
4. 对本段进行总结

Finally, we can also understand the higher education in a given society through studying the major universities usually located in the major cities.
Since universities are usually following a set of standards and guidelines in designing their curriculums and delivering their courses, the practices of major universities in major cities can be studied as representative cases to generate research insights that are usually applicable to similar universities in other areas. Through student exchange programs and visiting professorship, universities also learn from one another at institutional level and become more alike in how they operate. As a result, it is sufficient to study universities in major cities to understand the main features of higher education.

结论段写法指导
1. 重申自己的立场
2. 解释为什么主要城市可作为了解社会的典型案例

In conclusion, I strongly agree that major cities can serve as representative cases for studying the important characteristics of our society because in other cities and areas people often learn the best practices that have been developed in major cities.

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