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发表于 2016-1-20 20:23:28 |只看该作者

<error_type>系动词单复数错误，介词使用错误，重复</error_type>
<correction.s1>Causality between teacher's performance and students' performance is the basic reason of this assertion.</correction>
<correction.s2>Often the case, students' good academic performance is mainly due to their hard work.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:23:32 |只看该作者

<error_type>1. 谓语使用错误 2. 不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1> Causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performance is the basic reason for this assertion. </correction>
<correction.s2>Often the case, students’ good academic performance are mainly due to their own hard work. </correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:23:37 |只看该作者

<error_type>be动词用错 ,缺少介词</error_type>
<correction.s1>Causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performance is the basic reason for this assertion</correction>
<correction.s2>Often in the case, students’ good academic performance are mainly due to their own hard work.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:23:50 |只看该作者

句子 1 Causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performance are the basic reason for this assertion.
句子 2 Often the case, students’ good academic performance are mainly due to their own hard work.
<主谓不一致.s1>
<correction.s1>Causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performance is the basic reason for this assertion.
<主谓不一致.s2>
<correction.s2>Often the case, students’ good academic performance is mainly due to their own hard work.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:25:52 |只看该作者

<error_type>主谓不一致，第一句话的causality 未单数，第二句performance 也是单数</error_type>
<correction.s1>Causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performance is the basic reason for this assertion. </correction>
<correction.s2> Often the case, students’ good academic performance is mainly due to their own hard work.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:26:27 |只看该作者

<error_type>don't konw</error_type>
<correction.s1> Causality between teacher’s and students’ performance and students’is the basical reason for this assertion.
</correction>
<correction.s2>Often the case, students’ good academic performance mainly depends on their own hard work.
</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:26:49 |只看该作者

句子 1 Causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performance are the basic reason for this assertion.

Causality between teacher's and students' performance is the basic reason ...

句子 2 Often the case, students’ good academic performance are mainly due to their own hard work.
Often in the case, students' good academic performance is mainly due to their own hard work.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:29:21 |只看该作者

<error_type>主谓不一致</error_type>
<correction.s1> Causality between teacher’s performances and students’ performances is the basic reason for this assertion</correction>
<correction.s2>Often the case, students’ good academic performances are mainly due to their own hard work.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:33:59 |只看该作者

be动词使用
1、Casuality between teacher's performance and students's performance is the basic reason for this assertion.
2、Often the case, students' good academic performance is mainly due to their own hard work.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:36:54 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1> The causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performance are the basic reason for this assertion. </correction>
<correction.s2> Usually, students’ good academic performance are mainly due to their own hard-working. </correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:48:36 |只看该作者

<error_type> 主谓不一致</error_type>
<correction.s1>Causality between teacher's performance and students' performance is the basic reason for this assertion</correction>

<error_type>句式出错，主谓一致再次问题</error_type>
<correction.s2>As is often the case, students' good academic performance is mainly due to their hard work.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-21 01:45:08 |只看该作者

<error_type>单复数使用不当</error_type>
<correction.s1>1 Causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performances are the basic reason for this assertion. </correction>
<correction.s2> 2 Often the case, students’ good academic performances are mainly due to their own hard work.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-21 18:50:45 |只看该作者

<correction.s1>Causality between teacher’s performance and students’ performance is the basic reason for this assertion.</correction>
<correction.s2>As is often the case, students’ good academic performance are mainly due to their own hard work.</correction>

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