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gterlann 发表于 2017-6-17 01:35
ds160填了的话就不要主动提. 但是你自己要做好被问到的准备, 比如怎么口头上解释这个事情, 以及有没有相关 ...

版大，我是去读商科，why xx专业,我是不是可以说through my work at abc company and xyz company, But I need XXX专业 to help me fill in my specific knowledge gaps, such as general management, strategy, operation and finance. The MBA is the best way to quickly gain knowledge of these areas. And XXX专业 program will also enhance my “soft” leadership skills, sharpen my quantitative and analytical skills, enable me to network with sharp, talented people from different backgrounds, and global project will allow me to learn from real practice.
但是我感觉这样答是不是没有和学校挂上钩
至于他问我学校，我准备这么说
academic: xx school has different classes in marketing finance, especially healthcare concentration will allow me to learn the skills I am lack of, and family business center, family business will allow me to understand how to manage family business, outside class: xx school is a very diversity and collaborate community, I will learn from people with different background, and strong alumni in venture capital and healthcare will allow me to build networking which will help my family business to grow globally
the unique learn from experience culture, I can put what I learn from class into real practice
there are a lot of healthcare companies and the school has a great medical schools, I also plan to take some lectures to learn more.
因为我自己的career goal是继承家庭企业（一个教育培训机构，在本省是最大的）然后同时因为我之前一直是做医疗的，家族企业也有不少connection在中成药这块，所以我想再找点投资，来发展本土中成药，但是你知道，国内中成药这块因为没有良好的药物安全控制，所以一直没法做大做到海外，我的职业规划是想借鉴西药的药物安全控制，然后逐步把中成药规范化，所以我不知道我教育机构这块要不要提，还是直接说创业?还是两者结合比较好，我也有借鉴之前你给那个学中医的女孩的意见，在捉摸这么把我这个东西说透
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可爱的大面包发表于 2017-6-20 00:32
版大，我是去读商科，why xx专业,我是不是可以说through my work at abc company and xyz company, But I ...

版大，我是去读商科，why xx专业,我是不是可以说through my work at abc company and xyz company, But I need XXX专业 to help me fill in my specific knowledge gaps, such as general management, strategy, operation and finance. The MBA is the best way to quickly gain knowledge of these areas. And XXX专业 program will also enhance my “soft” leadership skills, sharpen my quantitative and analytical skills, enable me to network with sharp, talented people from different backgrounds, and global project will allow me to learn from real practice.
但是我感觉这样答是不是没有和学校挂上钩
至于他问我学校，我准备这么说
academic: xx school has different classes in marketing finance, especially healthcare concentration will allow me to learn the skills I am lack of, and family business center, family business will allow me to understand how to manage family business, outside class: xx school is a very diversity and collaborate community, I will learn from people with different background, and strong alumni in venture capital and healthcare will allow me to build networking which will help my family business to grow globally
the unique learn from experience culture, I can put what I learn from class into real practice
there are a lot of healthcare companies and the school has a great medical schools, I also plan to take some lectures to learn more.
因为我自己的career goal是继承家庭企业（一个教育培训机构，在本省是最大的）然后同时因为我之前一直是做医疗的，家族企业也有不少connection在中成药这块，所以我想再找点投资，来发展本土中成药，但是你知道，国内中成药这块因为没有良好的药物安全控制，所以一直没法做大做到海外，我的职业规划是想借鉴西药的药物安全控制，然后逐步把中成药规范化，所以我不知道我教育机构这块要不要提，还是直接说创业?还是两者结合比较好，我也有借鉴之前你给那个学中医的女孩的意见，在捉摸这么把我这个东西说透
再次跪谢

专业:

太长了, 除非你语速极快, 否则基本不会有机会说完. 精简;
核心肯定是lack of skills, so learn from this major. 不过具体的表述方式有待推敲;
总体的叙述方式也太空泛. 你这一段话, 精简完了: My XXX years' work experience at abc company and xyz company made me realize how much I currently lack in management skills and also how this lack might hurt me in future career advancement. 然后一个比较好的例子, 你可以说你认识你的一个同事大姐姐(最好要提到她的名字, 不要害怕说拼音, 有名字的人比 somebody 可信的多), 然后她是一个 MBA 毕业生, 然后你发现在工作上怎样, 时常意识到自己和她的差距, 并且曾经怎样她因为具有独特的 MBA 技能, 帮你解决困难 case 之类的. 当然这个例子的部分也要控制在两个句子以内.

学校:

第一句话: 学校牛逼, prestigious, 学生水平都很高, blahblah 的废话句子. 这一句话控制在不要太长, VO 都听烂了. 不过你得稍微说一下, 不然显得不正常. 就是个形式; 这个句子只要有几个 buzzword 就行了.
强调pecularity: 比如有family business course/center, 这个很少有学校有, 但是是你继承家业所需要的. 比如medical education/research exposure这个也可以提到. 可以带一两张能够暗示你的家业与 medical相关的照片或者打印纸, 到时候稍微晃一下之类的.

以上写的这些是你至少要准备的内容, 但是不代表你就准备这么点就行了. 在面签过程中, 通常的情况是,VO会很反感你说很长, 所以会打断你, 但是这不代表总是这样. 假如你说的很好或者 VO 正好对你感兴趣或者 VO 走神了, 他可能会一直不打断你, 这个时候如果你事先准备的东西太少, 那么你就可能现场"忘词"一样的情况, 这个就不太好. 比较好的做法是, 针对每一个问题, 准备不同的谈论point, 比如上面专业问题, 你就可以直接第一个点是技能 lack, 第二个点是大姐姐给我激励, 然后后面有些其他的点, 你可以继续准备. 这些 point 之间的关系, 遵循:

优先级由高到低, 也就是说在实际面谈的时候争取高优先级的先说出来, 后面的则是有多少时间说多少;
每一个 point 本身不要太长. VO 见得人太多, 对每个人的interest level是非常有限的. 一个很简单的小屁事说那么长, 人家不打断你都是客气的了. 比如:
xx school is a very diversity and collaborate community, I will learn from people with different background, and strong alumni in venture capital and healthcare will allow me to build networking which will help my family business to grow globally
the unique learn from experience culture, I can put what I learn from class into real practice
你看你这么长一个句子都说了点啥? 你还不如直接:
the students there are great, they all come from real practice and some even from large venture and background like me. I could learn from and network with them.
而且这个句子还好理解的的多. 在不给自己的英语表达能力减分的情况下, 适当减轻 VO 的理解负担, 利人利己. 题外话, 如果你真的决定说这个 point, 这个 point 的优先级应该不要太高, 因为这个 point 阐述的不属于 pecularity: don't all F1 students aim for that?

好好准备, 祝你成功.