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[GT送分] 由于ETS迟迟不能划卡,所以准备给学校去一封解释信,大家看看这么写行吗??帮忙 [复制链接]

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发表于 2003-1-4 01:47:08 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Dear Sir or Madam:

I am an applicant to your graduate program. I want to know if you have received my all application materials?

Yesterday, ETS told me that they couldn’t charge my money from my credit card, I do not know why, because I have enough money in my credit card. So please refer to my TOEFL and GRE photocopy score reports first, and I will ask ETS to send my official score to your place by asking them to charge my credit card again. I am sorry to make some inconvenience to you

And if I am lucky enough to be admitted and awarded the financial assistance, please inform me by email at your earliest convenience; if not, I would also be very thankful when you give me some advice on my future application. There is still one thing I want to tell you: I have intensive interest in your program and I deem it an honor if I can join your graduate group.

Finally, thank you for your help and I hope to hear from you soon.


Sincerely yours,
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发表于 2003-1-6 17:54:39 |只看该作者
Dear Sir or Madam:

My name is----------, an applicant to the ------------ program of your university.  I have already sent all my application materials to you by post.

I am writing to clarify one problem. I just got a message from ETS, saying that they could not charge my credit card for sending the TOEFL and GRE reports. However, my credit card works perfectly well with other payments in my applications. I will check with ETS to find out other alternatives to have my reports sent to you as soon as possible.

Meanwhile, since the application deadline is approaching, in order to save time, could you please refer to my photocopies of TOEFL and GRE scores reports first for your consideration of admission?  Sorry for any inconvenience it may incure.

Thank you for your assistance.

Yours sincerely,

Dreamer

以上短信谨供参考。
个人意见:写信要突出重点,同时要简洁。把事情说明白,并提出解决办法即可。

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发表于 2003-1-6 18:01:03 |只看该作者
谢谢silverbell!!

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发表于 2003-1-7 00:45:43 |只看该作者
我的文章终于置顶了,可惜作者不是我,斑竹就是斑竹,牛,可惜我的信早已经送出了。我的终结版是这么写的:
Dear Sir or Madam:

I am sorry to bother you again.

I am an applicant to your graduate program. I have finished my electronic on-line application, and have paid the application fee by credit card. I want to know if you have received my all application materials?

Yesterday, ETS told me that they couldn’t charge my money from my credit card, so have not sent my TOEFL & GRE official score reports to your place till now. But I do not know why, because I have enough money in my credit card. So please refer to my TOEFL & GRE photocopy score reports attached in my application packet first, and I will ask ETS to send my official score to your place by asking them to charge my credit card again. Maybe it needs a few additional days. I am sorry to make some inconvenience to you.

All your help will be greatly appreciated and I hope to hear from you soon.


Sincerely yours,

my name:
program applied:
application id:

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多一个参考吧!

也许有不少gters需要的呢!

还是谢谢你呀。

这篇文章肯定会收入精华区的。

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是啊是啊, that is just what I need!

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