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3:时间分配不好,应该是20说阅读,另外各20秒说听力论点(robin大神说的),short time?说教师很忙,they were always on the phone ,doing interview and have lots of paperwork to do. 两个细节都没说出来,估计是时间太短了
4:缺少细节,加上细节就可以了,roof damage,electronical problem,insects in the walls
5:挺好的,语速也可以
6:挺好的,说的时候别犹豫,不要改。
Task 6
adaptation发错了
文里说的是claw,你用的是feet
两点基本没问题不过细节稍微少了一点,还是建议概念直接说,不要说 the professor blah blah
直接说 There are two types of adaptation being discussed in this lecture. One of which is xxx, the professor uses xxx as an example. XXXX blah blah blah. 细节多一点。
然后 The other adaption is xxxx. xxxx blah blah blah