涉及到个人信息比较多,我就不发了
大体上就是直接翻译的给过去的中文信息
“My name is XXX. My interest is XXX. My purpose of applying is to XXX. My parents blabla, so I decided to blablabla.
I joined in XXX program. It improved my XXX ability. Besides I participated in XXX activity. My XXX had been enhanced. What's more I learnt XXX, studyed XXX,so it's helpful blabla”
这人最喜欢用“What‘s more” “not only but also” 和“as well as” 通篇用了好多处。。。受不了