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发表于 2008-8-29 17:09:15 |显示全部楼层
原帖由 aboretum 于 2008-8-29 12:44 发表
第十八句应该是 argument that is convincing though imprecise  吧



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发表于 2008-8-29 21:25:52 |显示全部楼层

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诸葛~~我回到学校了~~怎么安排的哈~~

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发表于 2008-8-29 23:25:45 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2008-9-3 09:25:38 |显示全部楼层
16. If one begins by examining why ancients refer to the Amazons, it becomes clear that ancient Greek descriptions of such societies were meant not so much to represent the observed historic fact--real Amazons--, but rather to offer "moral lesson" on the supposed outcome of women's rule in their own societies.
诸葛你说 本句有如下难点,第一:If 引导的条件状语从句中by后面引导的成分做begin的宾语  
但我觉得by的还是个方式状语啊~这里的begin应该是不及物的啊~~

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发表于 2008-9-3 13:21:34 |显示全部楼层

小问一个 第5句

5. With the conclusion of a burst of activity, the lactic acid level is high in body fluid, leaving a large animal vulnerable to attack until the acid is reconverted, via oxidative metabolism, by liver into glucose, which is sent (in part) back to the muscles for glycogens re-synthesis.

里面的vulnerable to attack    是否应该是被动式?  be attacked

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发表于 2008-9-3 17:54:08 |显示全部楼层
楼主GRE考了多少分?:funk: :funk:

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发表于 2008-9-3 18:13:24 |显示全部楼层
呵呵,难句还是内功,非一朝一夕能所成,阅读倒是感觉有点巧开

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发表于 2008-9-3 21:54:56 |显示全部楼层

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If one begins by examining why ancients refer to the Amazons, it becomes clear that ancient Greek descriptions of such societies were meant not so much to represent the observed historic fact--real Amazons--, but rather to offer "moral lesson" on the supposed outcome of women's rule in their own societies.
本句有如下难点,第一:If 引导的条件状语从句中by后面引导的成分做begin的宾语
我不明白by后面的怎么会是作为begin的宾语~~
难句DIY:



1. Nowadays, immense amount of parents and vast majority of experts come to believe that strengthening and boosting children learning or participating diverse kinds of education are indeed from various aspects that are making invaluable for all their lifetime, taking basic education as an unique course for their adolescent period for granted.
里面的are indeed from ...是怎么理解~?indeed是个adv,怎么会放在are后面呢~?不是应该是系表结构么~?
还有最后的那个taking basic education as an unique course for their adolescent period for granted 怎么理解列~~

2. Developing every individual toward their own directions is always important object which is requiring most children not only justified by their own ability of foundation but also commanded by expressing their versatile tendencies even in their young time.
中is always important object 是不是少了个冠词列~~我觉得应该为 is always an important object 才对的啊~~

3. While some people may still remain unconvincing, the reasons that I analyzed in above controversial argument should at least make them in a large sense for being aware of the complexities within this issue based discussion. 中的 While some people may still remain unconvincing, 是不是应该为While some people may still remain unconvinced 呢?~~

4. Whether you believe or not, written records has still play an overwhelmingly important role in modern society and we also accept this accustomed written records as a indispensable means for using wide public community, teeming with our consensus.
里面的 has still play 怎么理解~~?

5. (原因状语从句)For the primary reason is (宾语从句)that video camera, (插入语)as a major digital instrument in our civilized global community, (宾语从句中的系表结构)is more expensive than any other mean or tool of records (定语从句)which is unsuitable for undesignated person (定语从句)who can afford to it under the financial limited circumstance to buy it.

貌似没有主句了~~~?

6. Although video camera can accurately and convincingly record our real life and true experience around our society, however, it is impossible for those modern instruments to consummate precise record and depict our inward idea and consciousness, which has comparatively attested to a way of manifesting human being cultural or scientific object.

可以although....however这样用么~~?
还有which has comparatively attested to a way of manifesting human being cultural or scientific object好费解的~

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发表于 2008-9-5 00:37:13 |显示全部楼层
sa老师你太强了……

自卑的飘走……

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原帖由 <i>calmvaliance</i> 于 2008-9-5 00:37 发表<br />
sa老师你太强了……<br />
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自卑的飘走……
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哇哇。。。。   GMAT部分是你的了。 我和草木编写完GRE部分后,GMAT的是你的工作啊 呵呵  等你来写 嘿嘿~~~~
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发表于 2008-9-7 12:58:12 |显示全部楼层
:)斑斑大汗水大贡献啦~~
感谢~~

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马上出下面30句话啦 我争取这两天弄出来。
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发表于 2008-9-12 21:39:39 |显示全部楼层

10天前认真看过LZ的前20句

今天接着看哈
敢问“诸葛写的难句都能背下&摹写”?
相忘于江湖!

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发表于 2008-9-12 22:06:43 |显示全部楼层
不错,但是这个还是太初级了,啥时候深入真正的难句啊

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嗯。。。。    我是背过才写的 呵呵额
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