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这是8.5的作文,重写了一遍,路过有空的同学可以帮忙看看,谢谢啦:loveliness:
09.05.30NA
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger schoolchildren(ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music inaddition to math, science, history and language.
Nowadaysnormal elementary school, which is mainly targeted towards children aging fromfive to ten, provides various disciplines including math, language, science,history, art and music. Since some of them such as art and music seem to haveno relation with the promotion to higher grade, many people claim that won’t benecessary. But from my perspective, significance on those disciplines shouldn’tbe ignored in terms of my personal experience and emotion.
Forone thing, ages of five to ten is a crucial period for children to developtheir interests. But hardly will any child in such ages spontaneously realizewhat they are interest in. So a platform with wider range of knowledge thatextended to diverse disciplines or fields is necessary. Children shouldn’t belimited in classes like math and science only, especially when those classesmight fulfill their life in later secondary school and high school. Inaddition, interest in art and music will contribute to active thinkingpatterns, personality-shaping and aesthetic of beauty in early ages. And whenthey grow up, the special experience in art and music will become advantages intheir career because employers always prefer versatile individuals.
Whatshould also be noticed is that classes of art and music provide a chance torelease pressure. We have to admit that along with the fast-pace lifestyle, notonly adults live under huge working stress, children are also enduring pressureof entering a higher school. Since they are expected to be more competitive inthe future, study burden with extended classes and large amounts of homeworktends to be overweight. Long time on tedious disciplines such as math, science,history and language will cause negative impact on children’s emotion to study.However, art and music classes associated with active atmosphere will adjustthe bad mood so that improve the efficiency of study in normal classes. On thecontrary, if we cancel art and music classes, other normal disciplines willtake place, which will enhance the pressure and there will be no time formood-adjustment.
Ina nut shell, art and music classes are important to children aging five to tenfor the reason that early development in various field will contribute to theirfuture and lively atmosphere in such classes is helpful in releasing pressureand adjusting bad emotion for stressful study. |
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