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发表于 2010-8-17 00:03:51
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Most businesspeople are motivated only by the desire for more money.(Money)0 \( X2 X% i x0 ^+ I+ V7 N8 y- T7 `$ J0 O3 r4 {
People always debate on the motivation of businessmen. Parts of people believe that generally, most people do business for hankering after money. However, others take the opposite attitude. With all aspects carefully considered, I am more inclined to the latter in that the ultimate motivation of businessmen is their interests on commercial trade, social responsibility and desire of status rather than money. Nevertheless, money is the basis of these goals, which determines some people choose to become businessmen.(个人感觉这句话好像放在这里没有必要。。)
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Initially, interests are the basis of career. Many people like business itself. They enjoy experiencing the process of commercial trade. As is well known, many billionaires can live a luxurious life and even can provide comfortable condition for their children with the money they now have. However, they(指children? Or millionaires) are still diligent in their work. Personally, the best explanation of this phenomenon is that these businessmen treat business as their hobby(这个地方是不是可以说成, they dire the skills and strategy of dealing with business rather than money). In commercial trade businessmen can take advantages of their outstanding intelligence in competition and cooperation. A telling example(有效的例子?) is my uncle’s experience. He said it is his enthusiasm and interest on business that made him battle on the commercial trade so many years. When he competed with his rival, he feels that he is motivated and he like(likes) being a winner.
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Further lending to my position is the fact that many people do business due to their social responsibilities To illustrate this, we need look no further than the following case. The famous billionaire Bill Gates, who founds up the software company, now establishes funds to help the poor people. From my perspective, there is no doubt that it is his social responsibility that impels him (to run the business). Thus, it is obvious that there still existed something more significant than money for Bill Gates to chase.
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$ j* w+ Y2 c/ `1 ~4 D: UApart from the two points above, there is another essential factor that is readily discernible: succeeding in business field can gain a high social status. Especially some magnates can get privileges in favor of their reputation.(examples to support ?, 感觉好像有点空)/ R0 @$ E; F* }- J$ a
( Y1 D, o/ c+ s/ `. s) V. N! y- FAdmittedly, this is not the whole story. As to parts of businessmen, they are actually motivated by desire of money. Nevertheless, more businessmen choose the career ultimately due to other reasons rather than money. Maybe they are interests, desire of status and responsibilities.
(结尾,我觉得既然是赞成大多数人不是因为money, 并且文章body部分没有介绍那些desire money的人,最后结论我觉的就没有必要提啊)
以上纯属个人愚见,请楼主斟酌使用。
Most businesspeople are motivated only by the desire for more money.(Money)0 \( X2 X% i x0 ^+ I+ V7 N8 y- T7 `$ J0 O3 r4 {
People always debate on the motivation of businessmen. Parts of people believe that generally, most people do business for hankering after money. However, others take the opposite attitude. With all aspects carefully considered, I am more inclined to the latter in that the ultimate motivation of businessmen is their interests on commercial trade, social responsibility and desire of status rather than money. Nevertheless, money is the basis of these goals, which determines some people choose to become businessmen.(个人感觉这句话好像放在这里没有必要。。)
, r- E& U: q4 v& J* U9 H" _ x+ \6 % h
Initially, interests are the basis of career. Many people like business itself. They enjoy experiencing the process of commercial trade. As is well known, many billionaires can live a luxurious life and even can provide comfortable condition for their children with the money they now have. However, they(指children? Or millionaires) are still diligent in their work. Personally, the best explanation of this phenomenon is that these businessmen treat business as their hobby(这个地方是不是可以说成, they dire the skills and strategy of dealing with business rather than money). In commercial trade businessmen can take advantages of their outstanding intelligence in competition and cooperation. A telling example(有效的例子?) is my uncle’s experience. He said it is his enthusiasm and interest on business that made him battle on the commercial trade so many years. When he competed with his rival, he feels that he is motivated and he like(likes) being a winner.
( @( k! Z E+ m: A9 {, V/ I& q4 C- S2 w c& I- I0 \$ A. f
Further lending to my position is the fact that many people do business due to their social responsibilities To illustrate this, we need look no further than the following case. The famous billionaire Bill Gates, who founds up the software company, now establishes funds to help the poor people. From my perspective, there is no doubt that it is his social responsibility that impels him (to run the business). Thus, it is obvious that there still existed something more significant than money for Bill Gates to chase.
$ Q, u3 O2 I9 M$ q
$ j* w+ Y2 c/ `1 ~4 D: UApart from the two points above, there is another essential factor that is readily discernible: succeeding in business field can gain a high social status. Especially some magnates can get privileges in favor of their reputation.(examples to support ?, 感觉好像有点空)/ R0 @$ E; F* }- J$ a
( Y1 D, o/ c+ s/ `. s) V. N! y- FAdmittedly, this is not the whole story. As to parts of businessmen, they are actually motivated by desire of money. Nevertheless, more businessmen choose the career ultimately due to other reasons rather than money. Maybe they are interests, desire of status and responsibilities.
(结尾,我觉得既然是赞成大多数人不是因为money, 并且文章body部分没有介绍那些desire money的人,最后结论我觉的就没有必要提啊)
以上纯属个人愚见,请楼主斟酌使用。
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