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(09.02.21 NA) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country.
In the modern society, learning about a foreign country is no longer a dream. There comes a great many vehicles; some people claim that newspapers and magazines are the best ways, while in my perspective, travelling, television(中间应该是用and 连接) can also open a door for us to step into another land.
To begin with, travelling is a most valuable way which can let us experience a bland-new(brand-new) place in person. For example, I take delight in searching some(可删) photographs about scenery all around the world. Every time I try to imagine how the culture is, what the people like, and even what the cuisine is behind these pictures.(Everytime I saw these pictures, I will try to imagine ... 后面这几个小分句好像都不是很合规范~) Fortunately, last year, my parents took me to Japan. Besides roaming in the modern shopping heaven in Tokyo, the street which as clean as a glass also gives me a visually incredible impact(incredible visua impact应该就okay.但是貌似incredible用来形容impact不大好,一般是用来形容事件本身的~). Some local residents were so enthusiastic that they even walked with me for company as a guide when I got lost. Undeniably, without that travelling, I cannot acquire a distinct impression about Japan, containing polite residents, fashionable and first-class environmental hygiene., }, T q$ v4 }9 b* ^
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Moreover, we can also regard television as a telescope to amplify the corner throughout the world into the viewers’ eyes. For example, in the countryside, few farmers have capacity to go outside the mountains, no mention the foreign countries. However, since the televisions prevail in almost every family, people all around the world are no longer distant and isolated from each other; the most distant countries and the strangest customs are brought right to one’s sitting room. A lot of television programs introduce people to things in other continents they never thought of before and never(nor) heard of(删) before. More importantly, compared with dull feel from the radio or some paper, everything on television is more lifelike, vivid and real. Therefore, television is a more convenient and dramatic source of foreign information.
Admittedly, newspapers and magazines are also beneficial for us to inform about some current events in foreign world. Sometimes, we have no more time to watch television, or do not accumulate enough money to take a trip. In these cases, reading newspapers and magazines is another alternative which is comparatively cheap. For example, I am accustomed to reading newspaper during the breakfast; isn’t it so comfortable to nibble at a piece of bread and scan some headlines of international news or some gossips about a foreign star at the same time?2
(这段放在前面那两段论述之前应该比放在这里好一点,因为包括你后面的结尾都是although newspapers and magazines are good, but bla bla bla~ 不过你放到这里倒是另外又有种耳目一新的感觉~嘿嘿~)
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In conclusion, although newspapers and magazines do have merit to demonstrate us a little corner of a foreign country, the advantages of television and traveling in excess of the former form. With the development of economic and technologic globalization, the(a) growing number of modern vehicles has been approaching us. If we still confine our international perspectives to some paper, isn’t it out of step of times?
嗯,楼主的论述比较清晰,内容也比较流畅,但在词汇方面还是有点“不知所措”~另建议好好考虑一下倒数第二段的位置~
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