IBT——独立写作小组作业by flywinding

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：% Z Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

It is obvious that advertising is spread everywhere in our life and it has influenced people’s daily life. We can see all kinds of advertisement on TV, radio and even cannot escape the advertisement when being on the bus. In my point of view, it truly has an effect on our life, however, I think we should not blame the advertising for the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

To begin with, advertising has affected our eating habits to some scale. There are more and more advertising on our TV and some of them may be insert into the TV programs in order to catch our attention. Many of these advertisements are for unhealthy food or even junk food which will lead to unhealthy eating habits. According to a survey, a fast-food company will make at least more 50 percents profits if they start to advertise its products through one kind of media. In this way, most companies prefer to make an advertisement for their products in order to gain more profits.

Nonetheless, advertisement has an effect on our unhealthy eating does not mean it is the most important reason. Admittedly, as the development of the society, our life style has changed because of the more and more intense working competition. I think it is the pressure from work and life that causes the harmful eating habits. For example, a white-collar has to work 8 to 9 hours everyday on average. When they come back from work, it is always after 7 pm and they are also too tired to make their own healthy food. Thus, they will choose to have some fast food like instant noodle and hamburger from KFC. If the situation continues this way, they will cultivate unhealthy eating habits. Also, there are other factors overweighing the advertisement that may contribute to the unhealthy eating habits. Many companies will do what they can to attract customers. For example the barbecue boss shop may add some seasonings to the process in order to make the food more delicious with considering the seasonings contain the element that will cause cancers. In this way, it may lead to the customers’ bad eating habits.

In a nutshell, advertising has changed our eating habits in some cases. Considerable as bad effects to our eating habits advertising may lead to are, they cannot compete with the pressure of life and the delicious taste of the modern food that contribute to the bad habits. In order to better enjoy life, we should correct these bad eating habits.










The lecturer talks about that many scientists claim that dinosaurs were not endotherms, contradicting with what are stated in the reading passage.

To begin with, the lecturer says even if dinosaurs had lived in the polar regions, it is not enough to say that dinosaurs were endotherms. Because the lecturer says the polar region was much warmer than it is today. It was warm enough for animals which are not endotherms to live. So it was too assertive to conclude that dinosaurs were endotherms. This perspective totally differs from what is maintained in the article.

In addition, the lecture says it is true that dinosaurs and endotherms had the same leg position. However, it was insufficient to conclude that dinosaurs were enotherms. She gives another explain that this leg position can support large body like the dinosaurs. This is very different from what is stated in the passage.

Moreover, as to the bone structure, the lecturer claims although dinosaurs had Haversian canals, it does explain dinosaurs were enotherms. She give the reason that if dinasours were enotherms, they would grow evenly regardless of the season. However, the truth is that dinosaurs would grow very slowly when it is cold. This is another part the lecturer disagrees with the writer.

Judging from the three points above, it is obvious to see that the lecturer does not agree with the statement in the passage.


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