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本帖最后由 binghuoshenlong 于 2010-8-8 12:32 编辑
In the 21st century, part-time jobs have played a vital role in students’ life. According to the survey of China Daily, 69.3% of the college students are willing to have a part-time job when they are studying in the universities. Besides, 43.6% of the students who attend our investigation have already owned a job now. But we have to think, “Should students take part-time jobs? Will the job have a bad impact on their study?” Mr. Zhang, my headmaster in the Middle School, commented, “Jobs are just like a second class for students.”
(能改成大学校长吗)The quotation have answered the above questions: Part-time jobs of course should be taken for college students.
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For starters(freshman), students can gain a lot of experiences(experience)which, in the classroom, teachers can’t teach. (不能教经验,不通应该写成 we can not obtain)That’s the main reason why most of students are eager to take a part-time job out of the classroom, although they are having class at the same time. Part-time jobs just like a bridge to connect t(去掉to)he society and textbook knowledge, which will help you to have a good preparation for your future work. Without any working experience, you would find
it
a little difficult for you to get used to the environment of the society. Take my uncle John for example, who majors in Journalism. During his college life, he took a part-time job in the Beijing TV states for a whole year. He told us the experience working in TV states was greatly helpful and practical for his future career. As a result, he encourages us all to have a part-time job, if you guys have some spare time after your studying.
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Beside, part-time jobs can help you solve your financial problems and release the financial burden of your parents. During these decades, the fee of college is really too high, nearly 10,000 per year, which means my parents have to pay nearly 60% of the year’s salary. Needless to say, it really
the financial burden for my poor family. I believe many families have the same problems just like what my family has. In order to solve the problem, taking a part-time job is absolutely a good way. In China, there are 5% of college students come from the poor mountain area who can’t afford the enormous amount of fees, however taking a part-time job is a good help. , U2 p+ E+ L0 J1 I# J, n( B9 E: ^1 J# K
The last but not the least, during your work experience(去掉), it is good for you to make a lot of friends
who
will help you broaden your relationship circle. In this way, you can make friends with different backgrounds and different ages. Especially, making friends with persons older than you, they will tell their career or life experience and give you some warms (不懂什么意思)and advices. During my work, I met my boss John who taught me a lot. Not only did he tell me the skills about how to make my work done, but also he set a good example to me. Besides, he always encouraged us, “You are capable to do it well and you are the greatest” whenever we were feeling down about ourselves. With his encouragement, we became the most efficient team in our company. I feel so lucky to have the chance to meet my boss and he really teaches me what I couldn’t learn just sitting in the classroom.
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Admittedly, taking a part-time job has some negative sides either. Some students are not able to handle taking a job and having classes at the same time. So many things waiting for them to do, they feel massed up and stressful. Because the time is really limited, students should learn to make a good plan for your precious time and become mature enough to endure the pressure. If you can’t have spare time to own a part-time job, don’t do that then. You know, the studying is the primary work for students. 7 {4 [1 o7 T- W9 ?+ d, C
In conclusion, the advantages of part-time jobs far outweigh(合适吗) the disadvantages. There is a famous saying, “the more working experience you have, the more excellent work you perform”. We should explore the best of the benefits to have a great development of our work and then learn to balance your study and jobs to diminish the disadvantages.
总体感觉:比较啰嗦,一段话有时相同意思的事情或句子说几遍,用词比较繁琐,不够简练
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