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[活动] Do you agree playing sports give youmore lessons of life?(19号) [复制链接]

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发表于 2010-8-19 11:09:47 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
本帖最后由 Annne 于 2010-8-20 09:15 编辑

Topic: Do you agree playing sports give youmore lessons of life?



Playing sports has a universal appeal to human-beings, which not only strengthens our physical condition, but also our minds. Ample people stand a point that sports cannot create real remuneration in our life because sports were considered as a kind of game and entertainment. However, I do endorse that the sports activity will benefit for us on how to live an abundant life.

Tracing the history of sport competitions, it is not tough to discover that the original motivation of sport is to advocate the spirit of peace,raising the antique Olympic Games as an example. In the Olympic game, the competition of sports replaces the conflict of hostile countries, which was a more civilized and fair approach to the victory. After the world war one, the modern Olympic game confronted people's horizon again for the anticipation of peace. As a result, the ultimate lesson we learn from sports is the wish of peaceful life.

Recently, people contributed more meanings of sports with the development of sport industry. The public were convinced an opinion that the professional athletes establish an example of hard work and dream chaser. There are the delegates of power and miracle makers. Consequently, plentiful experiences of professional sportsmen inspired people who are struggling the darknesses in their life. There is no lack of examples in our life. The most significant athlete in bicycle sport,Armstrong gained a severe cancer when his career achieved the peak. The tough man faced the catastrophe with optimistic attitudes instead of complain. Finally,his tear and sweat was paid back and he attained other championships after he was cured.

On the contrary, for the sake of remaining the justice and invaluable culture of sports, the stimulus abusing , irruptions and treating on the competitions should be prohibited with some effective measures, which should be drawn the attentions of the relative authorities. As a public focus whose behavior gains a wide range of influence especially on the youngsters, the famous athletes had better to be more self-restricted.

Thereis never too late to sport. No matter you are an audience or a participant, the sport never stops its footstep to broadcast the attitudes of the belief: higher, faster and stronger.
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发表于 2010-8-20 21:16:02 |只看该作者
写的很好,加油
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发表于 2010-8-21 14:26:12 |只看该作者
我觉得写的很好么 但是不有点偏题 感觉您写的是运动的好处和life关联不多
愚人之见,呵呵。。。你作文写的好简洁 条例清晰 好好向您学习

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发表于 2010-8-21 16:55:32 |只看该作者
1# Annne
your language skill is excellent, yet i am regretted to say that you have distressed from the topic. the topic is PLAYING SPORTS teach LESSONS!!!! and in your essay your talked about the meanings and problems in sports, not what you have learnt in sports.
幸福就在身边,一点一滴。

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