Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.（21号）

AnnneUID：2819919

Nowadays, with the increasing awareness of the significance of healthy life style, people pay more attentions on their eating habit. As a result, there is an universal discussion on what are the causes of unhealthy eating habits and the effective approaches to avoid them.Recently a statement argued fiercely is that advertising is the most important reason occurring unhealthy diet. On the contrary, as my own stand points, the vital causes of unhealthy eating habit were overlooked by people's focuses.

Quite misunderstandable is for us to realize why the eating habit would be associated with advertisements. However, in the angle of commercial profit, it's not tough to find that the advertisement is a powerful tool for the manufactories to convince the public to buy their products, especially the unhealthy fast food companies put more efforts in the commercial promotion. However,commercials can not be regard as the most essential cause of unhealthy dietforming. According to a research form Baidu.com, approximately 70 percentage consumers prefer to their own adjustment and knowledge than what the advertisement told them.

the speedy living pace occupied a ample responsibility of the forming of unhealthy habits.Modern people living in a fast operated world have to chase the high speed pace. For the sake of catching up the traffic vessels to the workplace or school in the morning, most of people have to eat a undemanding breakfast which play a fundamental role on our body's daily work. The energy inside have been consumed mostly, yet people still have a simple lunch just to kill the hunger in order to gain more relaxing time during the limited breaking period. Finally finishing the daytime works and studies, too exhausted is people to cook or maintain appetite to enjoy a meal .Undoubtedly, less leisure time, less healthy and palatable meals.

Furthermore,behind the further reason lies a equally significant fact that the increasing choices of foot from different areas and countries break down the balance of local eating habits. Taking a typical case as an example, as a widely acknowledged saying goes: come and eat in Guangzhou.Guangzhou, where is the paradise of the parasites, contains various kinds of cuisines. A health center established a research that the spicy dishes share more and more proportion in Guangzhou citizen's diet ,which occurring the upward trend of heart diseases because the subtropical climate dose not permit the Guangzhou citizen having the spicy and simulative diet.


The influence of advertisement, in essence, cannot be neglected on leading the public consumption behaviors. Whereas, a healthy diet in accordance with individual situation should be advocated in a wire range.

lornechangUID：2877504

1# Annne 这是什么东东。。。21号的什么？

AnnneUID：2819919

2# lornechang 是一份21号作文互改的作业

AnnneUID：2819919

parent should making the decision for their children's future.Do you agree?


The pupils education commerce from the kneel of his or her mother. There is no more exaggeration on the significance of family education on the development of children's life. As a result, ample people maintain an standpoint that the parent should be the captain of their offspring’s' life with their own personal individual experiences. However, I endorse a statement,on the contrary, the children attained the right to determine their future instead of waiting for others decision, even their parents.
   Before discuses whether the parents should decide the future choices for their offspring, a question need to be assured in our mind, which is who would gain the responsibilities of the future decision making, parents or children? Undoubtedly, the children have to confront the sequences majorly. The children are the only delegate to distinct whether the options are right or not. They are also the only one to realize whether they live a happy life or not with the influence of the choices. Our history never lacks the certain kinds of tragedies deriving from the parent autocratic choices. In the ancient Asia, most of marriages of the younger generations were accorded with the elder generations' anticipation, which created many unhappy marriage lives because of the weak foundation of love and understanding with the couple. In this way, the right of making the future choices should converted back to the children.
   
   What's more, behind the reason above lies an equal crucial disadvantage that the most of parents determining choices do not respect their children's interests and talent, conversely they prefer to chase the favor of employment and the future achievements. Therefore, some interests, such as stamp collecting, feeding animals and playing Guitar, which were regard as no benefit for the future job applying, were prohibited by the parents. In this way, the children will grow up in a restricted environment and omit the ability of independent thinking.
  
   However, the parents viewpoints about decision making, in essence, can not be neglected. What do the youngsters acquire is not making options for them but providing suggestions when they facing the challenges. With the abundant life experiences and mutual personalities, the  parents can play a role of navigating when children was misleaded in the avenue to the future, a role of comforting when children struggling with failures and a role of alarming when children are rupturing in the compliment.
  
    As a human-being ,no matter young or old ,everyone should maintain the right and responsibility of determining what kind of future we would like to live in. the best is the parents to be a compass instead of captain when the youngsters are voyaging in their life.

lizhengjiangUID：2619543

Nowadays, with the increasing awareness of the significance of healthy life style, people pay more attentions on their eating habit. As a result, there is an universal discussion on what are the causes of unhealthy eating habits and the effective approaches to avoid them. Recently a statement argued fiercely is that advertising is the most important reason occurring （occurring,表达“导致”的意思吗？呵呵，第一次见）unhealthy diet. On the contrary, as my own stand points, the vital causes of unhealthy eating habit were overlooked by people's focuses.#（这样的开篇很老实也很老式。呵呵，似乎预言了下文要从advertising 和 vital cause两方面做对比，可又没有出现）

Quite misunderstandable（这个词，自造的吗，只是我的word词典没有收录它。呵呵） is for us（for us is） to realize why the eating habit would be associated with advertisements. However, (这个转折用的不好吧)in the angle of commercial profit, it's not tough to find that the advertisement is a powerful tool for the manufactories to convince the public to buy their products, especially the unhealthy fast food companies put more efforts in the commercial promotion. However, commercials can not be regard as the most essential cause of unhealthy dietforming.（没有接着分析下去，给人很大的疑问。Why can not be? ）According to a research form Baidu.com, approximately 70 percentage consumers prefer to their own adjustment and knowledge than what the advertisement told them.（摆完数据，最好有个结论）

The speedy living pace occupied an ample responsibility of the forming of unhealthy habits. Modern people living in a fast operated world have to chase the high speed pace. For the sake of catching up the traffic vessels to the workplace or school in the morning, most of people have to eat a undemanding breakfast which play a fundamental role on our body's daily work. The energy inside have been consumed mostly, yet people still have a simple lunch just to kill the hunger in order to gain more relaxing time during the limited breaking period. Finally finishing the daytime works and studies, too exhausted is people to cook or maintain appetite to enjoy a meal .Undoubtedly, less leisure time, less healthy and palatable meals. (看不出这段的用意，给我感觉是因为你写现代生活熟悉了，所以就加了这么一段。呵呵，有时候，我也想把文章写长点，就随便加，后来我的论文就成了散文。。论证的主线隐没了。。呵呵，悲剧)

Furthermore, behind the further reason lies an equally significant fact that the increasing choices of footfrom different areas and countries break down the balance of local eating habits. Taking a typical case as an example, as a widely acknowledged saying goes: come and eat in Guangzhou. Guangzhou, where is the paradise of the parasites, contains various kinds of cuisines. A health center established a research that the spicy dishes share more and more proportion in Guangzhou citizen's diet ,which occurring the upward trend of heart diseases because the subtropical climate dose not permit the Guangzhou citizen having the spicy and simulative diet. (也没有直接切入论文对象advertising 和diet habit)

The influence of advertisement, in essence, cannot be neglected on leading the public consumption behaviors. Whereas, a healthy diet in accordance with individual situation should be advocated in a wire range.


看完，总体感觉和我的很像。写作中自己可能感觉不错。。呵呵，但是旁的人读的却云雾缭绕，不知所云。。基于表达深度的能力欠佳，我现在的认识是用简单的话表达简单的意思，这样才比较能让别人明白，特别是阅卷老师了。呵呵
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