《12.20冲刺》IBT写作小组作文贴 by cckkll1994

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11.22综合
20min压着点写完的，250字，还得练速度啊

The lecture raises serious counter argument against the reading passage by providing drastically divergent views,regarding the lost during the construction,financial support and the availabilities positions for archeaologists.

To begin with,while the author claims that numbers of valuable artifacts were destroyed during the process of construction projects,the lecturer points out the facts that,according to the new guideline and rules,before any construction starts,the site has to be examined by archeaologists to see whether there are any  ancient artifacts and excavate them,if there are,before the constuction continues.

Secondly,contrary to the writer's statement in the reading passage that lots of archaeologists failed to get enough financial support for the government only fund for the most important and interesting sites while other project may be left without funding,the speaker argues that it is actually not the government that should fund the archaeologists for their,however the construction companies.And that is a whole now resource for archaeologists to do even more research in a even greater rage.

Last,another argument raised in the reading material is that many people who are interested in archaeology cannot find proper jobs and eventually change to other career because there are simply no available positions for them.And this directly contradict to what is state in the lecutre in which the professor asserts that with the new guideline and rules for archaeology,there are much more positions for new archaeologist in nearly all stages of artifacts research,such as drawing preservation plan, excavation and paper writing.

So, the content in the reading passage are refuted down to the last point by the professor and her fully distinctive ideas on the topic in the reading passage.

还是继续套用模板

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帮你的改好了。
我用模考写的，结果作文存没了。你就不用帮我改了哈。。。

加油加油~~

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11.23独立作文
Since the beginning of the twentith century when telephone and television were first invented, them have significantly changed the ways people live. In contemporary era,both of them serve a important function in our daily life.Yet, in the meantime, comparing to television, the telephone casts a greater influence on us from my perspective.

Regarding television, indeed, it provides us with all kind of information and entertainment in vivid pictures.However, in spite of televisions, there are other forms of media such as newspapers, radios, magazines and other places like cinemas, theaters, bars for people to relax and have fun. So it is possible that we are able to continue the life without the support of televisions.

Telephone, on the other hand, is necessary and indispensable for us to communicate with each other who are separated in different conmmunities, cities and even distant lands. Imagine a world before the invention of telephone: people have to travel a long way to meet their friends or write letters, which takes few days to reach the other side and another few days for us to get response. How inconvenient it is! Admittedly,even without the help of telephone,the old world thrived and once prospered, but telephone can never be replaced today, for the telephone has speeded up the pace of entire sociaties, while television is only regarded as a new resource of information.

Of course,the television also plays a vital role in our lives, in the sense that every day we upload our self with the latest news and information and probably feel relaxed though the mean of television. Also, it enables a lot fancy art, music and movies to introduce themselves to people, therefore television serves a part of culture spreader as well.

However, if we take all the factors we have and have not mentioned in to our consideration, it is not so hard for us to reach the conclusion that the telephone has greater effects on people than television.

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同学我觉得你写的很好呀，看了你的我觉得我跑题了。。。

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In contemporary era,when the pace of our life becomes faster and faster,we ask our selves:do we have to behave as politely as the old time in this busy and crowded world? Some individuals somehow believe it could be much efficient and save us a lot time if we get our job done directly regardless our manner or certain procedure,while others assert that we should always behave ourselves and be polite to each other. Speaking for myself,I agree with the later perspective.
      Regarding the former idea that it is acceptable for people not to behave politely,we,indeed,are able to bypass some complicated steps of communication ,which will save us time in some degree----but how much time could really be saved? Moreover,it also demonstrate that we are unlikely to have much help from other people in this way for our not-so-pleasing attitude.
     Concerning our manners,on the other hand,would enable us to acquainte with people well and even have more friends,which are always associated with support and opportunities. In this way we may find it easier to live in this busy and crowded world today.
      Besides,being polite to others reflects one of the most precious virtue of people,civility. Only if we keep those good qulities to ourselves,would we able to find  our ways of life.
      Of course,being straight has it advantages,such as efficiency,no constraint of etiquette... But if all the factors that we have and have not mentioned compiled,it is not so hard to see the benefits of courtesy weight more than its inconvenience. Accordingly,we could finally draw the conclusion that people should be polite to each other even in todays busy and crowded world.

我总有种感觉，这篇写得有些一般，不过至少40分钟写出来了

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11.24综合
练速度啊这次超了10min
      The lecture raise serious counter arguments against the reading passage by providing drastically divergent evidence and views regarding the three solutions of preserving Torreya.
      Firstly, while the author suggests the opinion that we could replant more Torreya trees at the very place where them have prospered for thousands of years, the lecturer points out the fact that the microclamite that is cast a essential role of their living has been effected by farming activities,globe warming and other factors and become drier than before. So it is unlikely that Torreya will thrive again in those regions.
Secondly,contrary to the writer's statement that people have option to relocate Torreya to an colder area which is more suitable for Torreya to live as  an assisted migration, the speaker argues that is highly risky ,conerning the case that when people move a kind of trees to the north years ago, they nearly exterminated most other plants.
      Lastly, another suggestion stated in the reading material that we could keep Torreya in reserach centers in order to protect and study them for their long existence is refuted down by the lecturer. She explans that if we preserve Torreya only in research labs, it is impossible for Torreya to reach a population that enables it to fight against diseases and survive because of the poor genetic varieties.
So,the lecturer's opinions are directly against the suggestions provided by the author.
(结尾没结好）

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The lecture raises serious counter arguments against the reading passage by providing drastically divergent evidence and views regarding the three solutions of preserving Torreya.
Firstly, while the author suggests the opinion that we could replant more Torreya trees at the very place where them have prospered for thousands of years, the lecturer points out the fact that the microclamite(拼写问题) that is cast a essential role of their living has been effected by farming activities,globe warming and other factors and become drier than before. So it is unlikely that Torreya will thrive again in those regions.
Secondly,contrary to the writer's statement that people have option to relocate Torreya to an colder area which is more suitable for Torreya to live as  an assisted migration,（这句写得很好） the speaker argues that is highly risky ,conerning the case that when people move a kind of trees to the north years ago, they nearly exterminated most other plants。
      Lastly, another suggestion stated in the reading material that we could keep Torreya in reserach centers in order to protect and study them for their long existence is refuted down by the lecturer. She explans that if we preserve Torreya only in research labs, it is impossible for Torreya to reach a population that enables it to fight against diseases and survive because of the poor genetic varieties.
So,the lecturer's opinions are directly against the suggestions provided by the author.

综合写作一般不需要结尾，这个结尾的确有些仓促，实战的时候可以去掉，分数还可能再高点

kaolaliangUID：2758807

第2段：globe warming and other factors and become drier than before  
(other factors 是 wet land through Florida has been XXX 没听懂（driven？ 还是什么）） 我听力有严重的问题

第3段虽然没写出Black Tree 但写出了这个考点。

我的观点和楼上FannieHsu一样，结尾不是主要得分点，主要的还是尽可能多写出听力的点，这点楼主做的很好，向你学习

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11.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life.


The most important feature for human to distinct from other mammals is the ability to learn.Every day,we assimilate information and learn in various ways,such as reading,taking classes,watch television,reading papers and magazines,[url=]ect[/url].Yet,whether we can more from playing sports has raise much debate amount [url=]educaters[/url] and even ordinary people.Some individuals assert that sports teaches more lessons about the life,while others believe that physical exercise is no more than a training of out bodies.Speaking for myself, I am side with that former view.

To begin with,sports are more than just series of physical exercises, however,each of them [url=]conveys[/url] messages and always represent a certain sprite even from its very beginning.For example, marathon,a popular long-distance running sports which is usually hold in spring and fall,is originate from the great war between Persia and Greek alliance.There was a campaign took [url=]palce[/url] is a city named marathon,the campaign was bloody and many soldiers lied down there forever.After days of siege,the city became a place of ruins,but finally the Greek defeated Persian army and retook the city.A Greek soldier run several days, without sleep or even rest, to Athens to convey the massage  of vitory. When he reach the capital,he shouted the news of the triumph,and died then. Dedicate to the memory of the soldier, people invented the sport and named as Marathon.A sprite of fortitude,a sense of sacrifice they passed with the sport after thousands of years,and this is what the sport teaches us.

Secondly, most of sports are regarded as team work, such as football,basketball and tennis.To play these sports,people have to work together, cooperate with each and every member of the team to reach the goal. Therefore, we learned the team sprite though many sports and this is another thing that sports teach us.

From all that we have and haven’t discussed,is is not so hard for us to reach the conclusion that playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life.

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11.30 TPO5

The lecturer raises serious counter argument against the reading passage concerning the useage of Chaco “great houses” by providing drastically divigent evidence.

To begin with,while the author claims that the houses might be used for residential purpose because of the similarities between the “great houses” and later “apartment buildings” at Taos,the lecturer points out the fact that there are so few fire places and individual rooms that it is unlikely the houses are function as apartment buildings.

Secondly,contrary to the hypothesis mentioned in the reading passage that the houses are possibly for food storage,such as maize,the sperker argues that this case is contradicted by evidence that excavations showed there is no sign of maize remain or other food traces.

Lastly,another argument raised in the lecture directly refute the possibility from the reading material that the “great houses” served as a ritual role in Chaco society in the sense that massive of pots found in mound around these houses suggests that Chaco people feasted in the ceremonies and dropped those dished later.The lecturer explains that many other things that have no relevance with ceremony have also been found at the mound,such as building material,tools and other trash.

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1127 revised by Kitther      单词拼写有几个错误，楼组自己改改吧。
      汉语思维比较典型，和我一样。
      "is originate from" 语法不对，不要is。
      "There was a campaign took [url=]palce[/url] is a city named marathon,the campaign was bloody and many soldiers lied down there forever." 改成 there was a bloody campaign took place in city Marathon, and many soldiers died in the battle.
         "To play these sports,people have to work together, cooperate with each and every member of the team to reach the goal. "改成"To reach their goal, teammates cooperate with each other tightly in the game."
        多读一读好的范文吧，一起努力。

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers’ salaries6



    In contemporary era, it is universally accepted that the issue of education is cast a increasing crucial role in a country’s development.Yet, in the meantime,whether increase the salaries of teachers is the best way to improve the quality of education has sparked much debate.While some individuals believes that up-lifting the payment of teachers will make a beneficial change of the current circumstance,some other people assert that increasing teachers’ salaries is merely one of many ways to enhance the education qualities.Speaking for myself,I am side with the later view.

    Concerning paying more to teachers, it, indeed, may attract more young people to choose education major and to become educators then. But it also demonstrates that the possitive effect will appear much later than the time we "invest" Moreover, it is not an exact science that there is surely going to be much more individuals choosing educational career in the future.

    On the other hand,if we concert our effort on something more practical the benefits would be immediate.Firstly,government could spend more money to establish a more mature basic education system and update the "hardware" in primary and middle schools, such as projectors, schoolbuildings,g rass playgrounds,etc.Then,they also have options to pay attention on higher study which means universities, for the universities are now function a more vital role in scientific research fields and much more high-school graduated students choose attending to universities.Adimittedly,these enhancement may not have a wide-spread influence as increasing salaries of teachers.Yet, only in these ways,are we able to actually improve the quality of education instead of making predictions.

    Of course, up-lifting teachers' payment has its own advantages,such as alleviating teachers'  pressure and attracting more people to enter education career.However,if all the factors we have and have not discussed compile, it is not so hard for us to discover that the benefits of increasing the salaries of teachers are insufficient for people to consider it as the most essential means to enhance the qualities of education.

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