I concede that patriotism serves as an independent[不太明白,为什么是independent factor,是不是想表达“唯一”的意思?] factor in attitude of people in relation to the domestic and the imported goods. 这里的我是指有一部分人就是觉得爱国,独立并不与金钱或者什么相关,所以价格多少都会买,因为我爱国。这个我是不是想的多了。
For instance, it is the competition that makes our life better more healthy and longer than before. With the development of medicine and biology, more and more people are far from various types of disease, and promote our traditional ways of life.[这句话只是说明了医药和生物学的进步带来的好处,没有突出竞争怎么让生活变好。] researchers have engaged in study and accelerate competition.it is competition that makes our life better more healthy and longer than before.
get a repaired washing machine[get a washing machine repaired? ]. 这个我想表达的是一个修好的洗衣机 get a washing machine had repaired?
But now increasing in types and quantity of products[services?] let us have many alternatives to turn to
But now increasing in types and quantity of products let us have many alternatives to turn to. In order to improve competitive ways,producer also enhance their consumers' service.我是想表达这个,可能昨天写晕了。
what you think would be the future social network like? 我也发现问题了,这句话是2次写的,应该是what do you think the future social network would like ?
Factories,who need [工厂不应该用who;后面是need to]produce to satisfy people’s life, are primary contributes because they rely on rivers or oceans for disposing of water. 这个没看明白。
fur,skin,horn,teeth and meat. [感觉都用-pl形式会好一点。不过这里名词罗列很赞] -pl 是神马??
you get into your car, switch[这句话有两个主语。可改为as soon as] on the navigation system with login in your social network account,and then ask it to guide to a friends’ home. 这个我想用的是谓语并列,and then ask 这里也是并列。我语法也很渣的,有时候会记得阅读过的,但经常会模糊。