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根据给出的issue,写出开头第一句,要求对issue的claim进行同义转换。

135) Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
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发表于 2014-12-17 22:34:33 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 黛丝丝丝丝 于 2014-12-17 22:36 编辑

It is suggested that students should be encouraged to make decisions on fields that will lead them to well-paid jobs

make decision->specialize or major in

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黛丝丝丝丝 发表于 2014-12-17 22:34
It is suggested that students should be encouraged to make decisions on fields that will lead them t ...

make decision不够清晰 直接用specialize/ major/ concentrate their study on

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Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.

Given the high cost of higher education nowadays, it is often suggested that students should be enouraged to specialize in an area that can help them to land a well-paid job upon graduation.

In order to justify the expensive tuition of university education, ...

With the hope to boost the income level of graduates, universities may have the incentive to encourage their students to choose majors that can lead to financially rewarding careers.  


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发表于 2014-12-17 22:42:03 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2014-12-17 22:44 编辑

Due to the fact that prospective students and their parents evaluate educational institutions considering average payment of the graduates, it is suggested that enrolled students should be encouraged to major in fields that will lead them to well-paid jobs.

Due to the fact that prospective students and their parents evaluate educational institutions based on average payment of the graduates, it is suggested that enrolled students should be encouraged to major in fields that will lead them to well-paid jobs.

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145) The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

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发表于 2014-12-17 22:48:57 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2014-12-17 22:53 编辑

It is suggested that to evaluate whether a country is great or not, people should base on the general living standards of its citizens rather than individual achievements in areas of policy, art and science etc.

It is suggested that, to evaluate whether a country is great or not, people should make their judgment based on the general living standards of its citizens rather than individuals' achievements in areas of policy-making, art and science etc.

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How can one assess the greatness of a nation? Some people believe that the general well-being of the citizens should be used as indicators. Others think that a nation's greatness is reflected in the accomplishments of rulers, artists and scientists.  

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77) The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

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发表于 2014-12-17 22:57:25 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 黛丝丝丝丝 于 2014-12-17 23:05 编辑

Since the youth represent the future of a society, some may believe that it is the most effective method to study the trend of the young people for further understanding of what is happening now in our culture.

Since the youth represent the future of a society, some may believe that if we study the trend of young people we will, through the most effective way, gain further understanding of what is happening now in our culture.

Since the youth represent the future of a society, some may claim that to study trend of young people is the most effective way to gain further understanding of what is happening now in our culture.

这里it指代不清晰

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It is argued that, in order to effectively understand cultural development of contemporary society, the best approach is to analyze the trends among the young people.

Would the analysis of the trends of the youth lead to better understanding of the culture of the contemporary society? Some people believe so probably because the youth are usually more sensitive to the latest cultural development.  

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27) In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
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发表于 2014-12-17 23:11:40 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 黛丝丝丝丝 于 2014-12-17 23:19 编辑

Some insist that novice is more probably achieve great outgrowths than specialists no matter what field is considered with.


Some insist that novice have better chance to make great achievements than specialists regardless of the fields in which they work.

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It is suggested that, in different fields of inquiry such as mathematics, natural sicence and social science, beginners have a better chance than their more experienced colleagues to contribute something important.  

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发表于 2014-12-17 23:26:45 |显示全部楼层
Memo:

开头段做同义转换有几个方法:

1.同义词转换:包括单词和词组的转换
2.加入background info 比如这个看法的背景、缘由、目的等
3.细分领域(见14楼simon老师例子)
4.将主动语态改写为被动语态
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