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今天在 random.org 用宇宙噪音又筛选了十题练习：

25) Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
同义词转换
To ensure the equality of education, some claim that governments are responsible for college and university educational expense on all students enrolled.

To ensure the equality of education, some claim that governments should be responsible for educational expense of all students enrolled in colleges and universities.


50) Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
句型分类，同义词转换
What is the the most reasonable way to deal with opinions from the public? Some claim that governments should insist on their own perspective and policy, while others believe that officers should listen to voice of public and follow them with no doubt.

What is the the most reasonable way to deal with opinions from the public? Some claim that governments should insist on taking their own perspectives when making policies, while others believe that officers should listen to voices of the public when making decisions.


70）Claim: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's major field of study.
Reason: Acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated.
被动语态
To someone’s belief, various of courses out from the one’s major field should be required by universities to their students. People who hold this belief mainly because they value diversity on academic disciplines the very best way to educate students.

Some people believe that, in order to become truly educated, students have to learn knowledge from different fields. Therefore, students should be required to take different courses in fields other than their majors.  

30）Teachers’ salaries should be based on their students’ academic performance.
加背景
To potentialize teachers’ ability on education, some claim that students’ academic performance should be the determinant for teaching faculty’s salaries.

To provide more incentives for teachers to help students learn effectively, some claim that ... should be the decisive factors for determining teachers' salaries.

43)There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.
细化领域
Because it may cost a great amount and take countless efforts, some claim the endeavor of saving endangered creatures is of little meaning regardless of what great contribution this endeavor may make in aspect of international cultural communication, long-term economic pay-back and ecological balance.

Because it may lead to unemployment and loss of opportunities for economic development, some claim the endeavor of saving endangered creatures cannot be justified.

78)People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
被动改主动
It is suggested that the intimate situation or circumstance has determined people’s attitudes while the wholly society plays a relative unimportant role on this influence.

4) A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
被动
It is suggested that curriculum before college education should be kept in the same through all education institution through the entire country.

It is suggested that the same curriculum should be adopted  in all educational institutions before colleges throughout the entire nation.

44) The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
同义词转换
Some believe that machines are only tools for human minds; thus, their abilities will never surpass that of human minds.

123) The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
同义词转换
Some advocate that teaching students to cooperate rather than to compete with each others is the best method to help them to lead in team in many positions— governing officers, business manager or others career in future.

It is argued that, to help the young people to become future government officials, business managers and leaders in other fields,  the best approach is to teach them to cooperate rather than to compete with one another.

40)Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.
  Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.
同义词转换

Since some believe that students tend to perform better when they are interested in their major, it is suggested that educators need to combine students’ interests and advices with the curriculum arrangement.


With the belief that students tend to be more motivated when they are interested in their course materials, it is suggested that educators need to incorporate students’ interests and advice into the course syllabi.

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盗用daisy random.org的成果：

25) Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.


To boost the development of education, someone suggests governments should provide a free college and university education to all students.

To expand the access to higher education, some people suggest governments should provide free college and university education to all students.




50) Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.

When making decisions, should government officials rely on their own judgment or carry out the will of the people they serve without questioning?
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70）Claim: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's major field of study.
Reason: Acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated.

To raise the education level, someone claims that a variety of courses outside the student’s major field of study should be required by universities to their students, since they believe it’s the best way to make students truly educated.

To raise the education level, some people claim that a variety of courses outside the student’s major field of study should be required by universities to their students, since they believe it’s the best way to make students truly educated.

To raise the education level, some people claim that a variety of courses outside the student’s major field of study should be required by universities to their students, since they believe it’s the best way to make students truly educated.



30）Teachers’ salaries should be based on their students’ academic performance.

To better evaluate the teacher’s teaching ability and inspire them to raise the level of classes, someone argues that their salaries should be relevant to their students’ performance in academy.



63)There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.

With the rapid development of economy and industry in a world-wide range, people face the dilemma of protecting nature and improving profits. Some people claims that making extraordinary efforts which costs a great number of money and jobs to save endangered creatures is unwise.


78)People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.

What basis are people’s attitudes determined upon? Someone claims the most essential factor is people’s immediate situation or surroundings, while others believe the whole society is the major basis.  

6) A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

To raise the level of education, some people suggest a unified national curriculum before college.


64) The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

Faced with the advent of technology singularity theory, some people may be worried that one day machines would be superior to human beings and even take place of them, while some others claim there is no need to worry so since machines used to be, are and will be only tools of human minds.

123) The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

To prepare young people for leadership in any given fields, some one claim that a sense of cooperation should be attached more importance than a sense of competition.


40)Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.
  Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.

To better motivate students to learn, some one suggest educators should take students’ interests and advice into consideration when planning courses.  

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maoerdwn 发表于 2014-12-18 19:09
盗用daisy random.org的成果：

25) Governments should offer college and university education free o ...

改了前面两句 不要用someone suggests that... 用some people

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改了前面两句 不要用someone suggests that... 用some people

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