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[主题活动] Argument写作入门-开头段第二步:根据题目要求写主旨句 [复制链接]

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发表于 2015-3-3 09:56:21 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-4 13:57:49 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 纪晓晴 于 2015-3-4 15:00 编辑

房地产练习:
结论:
Adams 更好,应该选择Adams
论据:
agents人数更多(服务态度质量也更好)
销售收入更多(利润更高)
卖的更快(十年间房市不变,)

According to the author, Adams Realty is superior to Fitch Realty, thus, people are suggested choosing Adams Realty when considering selling a house. The author comes to such a conclusion, given the size of employee, revenue las year and the author’s own experiences. However, assumptions underlying need to be scrutinize, such as the profit of Admas and other aspect of employee and the changing situation during 10years.


上一篇练习的继续改正~~http://bbs.gter.net/thread-1795774-3-1.html
Argument 1
Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a 'Palean' basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

开头段:
According to the author, Woven baskets were not uniquely made by Palean people, considering the basket newly found in Lithos and the inaccessible of Lithos. In order to verify the statement, we still need more evident about transportation situation, volume of the Brim River.


Argument 2:
The following appeared as part of a letter to the editor of a scientific journal.
"A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. The study showed that in stimulating situations (such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys produce up to twice as much of the hormone cortisol, which primes the body for increased activity levels, as do their younger siblings. Firstborn humans also produce relatively high levels of cortisol in stimulating situations (such as the return of a parent after an absence). The study also found that during pregnancy, first-time mother monkeys had higher levels of cortisol than did those who had had several offspring."
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.

开头段:
According to the editor, the birth order has effects on an individual's levels of stimulation, given the study result and common sense. Yet, the result provided by study can be have other explanation, in terms of the age and the nurturition the(这个题不太会写啊。。。)


Argument 3:
The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner.
"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

开头段:
According to the passage, Central Plaza should prohibit skateboarding which can attract more customers. Complains from shop owners and the littering and vandalism support the conclusion. However, several questions needed to do be considered before coming to the conclusion, namely the real cause of littering and vandalism, the evaluation from customers and the outcome of prohibiting skateboarding.

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发表于 2015-3-10 03:21:28 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-11 16:40:43 |显示全部楼层
thx for sharin

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发表于 2015-3-13 13:15:55 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-18 00:09:36 |显示全部楼层
顶!!

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发表于 2015-3-19 17:15:54 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-21 10:05:35 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-21 20:05:56 |显示全部楼层
赞!!!!!!!!!!

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发表于 2015-3-21 20:57:00 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-24 16:35:25 |显示全部楼层
谢谢了

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发表于 2015-3-25 22:44:39 |显示全部楼层
学习学习,非常重要啊。

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