【独立+综合写作】qiaoyi0181作业贴！二战目标：27+

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写得很好。学习了

可以多花点时间搞你的弱项

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批改~

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独立写作的开头段有点不太好。
不过你语言功底很棒啊，写作也很流畅，厉害啊~

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秦时关訾海 发表于 2015-9-13 19:05
9.11你的两个写作，http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0yhVqS

不好意思来晚了，请见谅。

感谢批改！

独立作文我当时想的是：1.质量好的商品能确保其市场 2.质量好的商品还能让消费者为其主动宣传 3.让步，广告太多也不好 总结：质量好要比一味投广告要好
不知道这样一说还感觉逻辑上有没有问题？

另外，写成another three是不也合适一些

35好句能帮忙给个链接吗？我找了一遍没找到。。。。

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综合没什么好评的，你肯定是good中的满分~~

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托福高分作文必背35好句:
　　一、~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
　　~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/ heard/ had/read, etc)
　　例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
　　海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
　　Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
　　张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
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　　二、Nothing is + ~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
　　例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.
　　没有比接受教育更重要的事。
　　三、~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)
　　例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
　　我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
　　四、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)
　　例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
　　不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
　　五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...)
　　例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
　　全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
　　六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的...)
　　例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
　　毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
　　七、An advantage of ~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...)
　　例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.
　　使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
　　八、The reason why + 句子 ~ is that + 句子(...的原因是...)
　　例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
　　我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
　　九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此...以致于...)
　　例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
　　十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~ (虽然...)
　　例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
　　虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
　　十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~ the + ~er + S + V ~
　　The + more + Adj + S + V, ~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~(愈...愈...)
　　例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.
　　你愈努力，你愈进步。
　　The more books we read, the more learned we become.
　　我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
　　十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...，..能够..)
　　例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
　　借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
　　十三、~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (..使..能够..)
　　例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
　　听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
　　十四、On no account can we+ V ~ (我们绝对不能...)
　　例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
　　我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
　　十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是...的时候了)
　　例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
　　该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
　　十六、Those who ~ (...的人...)
　　例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
　　违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
　　十七、There is no one but ~ (没有人不...)
　　例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.
　　没有人不渴望上大学。
　　十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不...)
　　例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
　　既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
　　十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)
　　It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)
　　It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)
　　例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
　　可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
　　二十、That is the reason why ~ (那就是...的原因)
　　例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.
　　夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
　　二十一、For the past+ 时间，S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来，...一直...)
　　例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
　　过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
　　二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。
　　例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
　　自从他上高中，他一直很用功。
　　二十三、It pays to + V ~ (...是值得的。)
　　例句：It pays to help others.
　　帮助别人是值得的。
　　二十四、be based on (以...为基础)
　　例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
　　社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
　　二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
　　例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
　　我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
　　二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让...明白...事)
　　例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
　　我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
　　二十七、be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)
　　例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.
　　做运动与健康息息相关。
　　二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving
　　= make it a rule to + V (养成...的习惯)
　　We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
　　我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
　　二十九、Due to/Owing to/
　　Thanks to + N/Ving, ~ (因为...)
　　例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
　　因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。
　　三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!
　　= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)
　　例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
　　How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
　　遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
　　三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不满意)
　　例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
　　我们的交通状况令人不满意。
　　三十二、Have a great influence on ~ (对...有很大的影响)
　　例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.
　　抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
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　　三十三、do good to (对...有益)，do harm to (对...有害)
　　例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
　　Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
　　三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ (对...造成一大威胁)
　　例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
　　污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
　　三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best (尽全力去...)
　　例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
　　我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
　　这些句子我们也许都见过，但是又有谁真正很自然的运用到自己的文章中呢，所以，赶快背下来喽~~希望给你们帮助。大家有什么好经验什么的互相分享哦!!!!!

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yolandapiu 发表于 2015-9-15 11:36
托福高分作文必背35好句:
　　一、~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/hea ...

感谢啊！！考前这两天就靠这个了！！

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看了简直震惊 ！ 楼主太努力了！一定会有好成绩的！ 加油

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作文还是一如既往的赞！