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题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

        Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many factors play a role in maintaining a good relationship, like money, power, affection, courage, honesty and so on. Then which one is the most important for people? Well, the attitudes towards this controversy differ from person to person. But for me personally, always telling the truth is the most consideration to establish an association.

At first glance, it seems plausible to tell lies sometimes as long as you do not violate laws. Lies can help people to avoid many troubles because people only tell out what is good to them. Besides, sometimes liars can also cheat other people to follow and support them so that they can achieve huge success with the help of followers, or maybe more specific, the lies. Meanwhile, telling the truth can only cause unnecessary unhappiness and debate. So it seems to be wiser to tell lies instead of truth under such conditions.

The fact is, however, that cheating cannot exist forever without being revealed or uncovered. Only through always keeping honest can help you gain permanent success. Why? Firstly, always telling the truth makes you a reliable person. On the contrary, if you ever lied to somebody, even for once in a way, you are no longer honest and reliable. People will doubt your honesty and reevaluate your integrity in their heart. Image that a white paper which is dotted by an ink drop. You cannot call it a white paper anymore because the paper has been fouled by the ink drop. And it is the same to your honesty. Therefore, always telling the truth is of vital importance to be a reliable and credible person in the real life.

Furthermore, always telling the truth gives you more opportunities to succeed. It is difficult to imagine that a boss will assign his employees important tasks who have been found to be dishonest and cheating. Whereas you can get more chances in the work or study because you are reliable, and your boss trusts you. They know the basic rule that honesty is the first requisite to do things well and that you won’t cheat them into failure. Obviously, your honesty instead of your tricks can help you to be distinctive in your career. We have learnt from the daily life and news reports that it seems common honest people will be appreciated and promoted in a competing company, while dishonest employees lose the chance to succeed, sometimes even their jobs.

In summary, always telling the truth makes people be reliable and endows them more opportunities to outstand in the career lives while cheating can lead people to the misfortune; therefore always keeping integrity should be the first concern when people try to build a relationship with others.


题目:Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


Everybody needs to leave his/her parents and family when s/he grows up. The question is when is the suitable time for leaving? Well, attitudes towards this controversy differ from person to person. Some want to be independent as soon as possible while others seek a longer stay with their parents. But for me personally, an earlier independence is more beneficial to the development and mature of young adults.

First, when leaving from the family at early time, young adults can learn how to be responsible and capable to their own matters. They have nobody at hand to turn to for help when they have a difficult time or have to make some annoying choices. The only thing they can do is make their own choice, take their own responsibilities and strive to solve the problems. Through these precious experiences they will learn what life is and be more responsible to their lives. Meanwhile, imagine a young adult who still live with his/her parents. S/he can never learn how to handle things by herself/himself because parents take care of all the things well like the expenses, housework and so on.

Furthermore, since early independence can make young adults more responsible and capable, it is reasonable to expect that these young adults will prepare themselves much better for the increasingly competitive world. As is known to all, nowadays the world is developing rapidly and people from all over the world will compete together radically for a better life and future. Those young adults who learn precious experience from early independence will have more chance to win in the competition because they know well how to handle the challenges from life and work. However, young adults always depending on their parents in their lifetime cannot adapt to the competing environment because of poor preparation.

Admittedly, living with parents has much more convenience and comfort for young adults. Whereas it is harmful to their future development when they finally have to leave the families and face the world all by themselves. What they can do then? The wise action is that young adults can ask their parents for some benign advices meanwhile make their own decisions and work hard to fulfill them, which will prepare the young much better for their own lives.

To sum up, an early independence is wise for young adults to become more independent and capable, which will help them face the radical challenges in the future with confidence. Meanwhile young adults can turn to our parents for some useful advices, but cannot rely on their families totally.
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发表于 2015-8-18 10:30:17 |显示全部楼层
求批改或者互改:handshake:handshake

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发表于 2015-8-25 14:33:08 |显示全部楼层
我擦 你半小时能打450个字 醉了 我才350左右

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2499370956 发表于 2015-8-25 14:33
我擦 你半小时能打450个字 醉了 我才350左右

有时候可以,如果思路不对就只有350个,可以互相批改么?

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