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<error_type>缺少连接</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, and if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

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<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>

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This reminds me that I appear different in different places,too.

People settled down on the island will need food to survive, 错太多,没法儿改了

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<error_type>一个句子中有两个谓语动词</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear to be totally a different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people who had settled done must have search for food to survive. If the food was so precious that human would compete with animals, then the number of mammals would probably decrease even to the extent of extinction.</correction>

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本帖最后由 kasy 于 2016-1-20 23:22 编辑

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<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I also appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or is the only food that is suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

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<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型(如果不知道就填不知道)</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that my appearance is different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down on the island must have searched for food to survive. If a kind of food,  which is vital for human,  is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is  occupied by human on a big amount.</correction>

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<error_type>不完整</error_type>
<correction.s1>It remains me that I appear different in different places </correction>
<correction.s2>. </correction>

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<error_type>1.缺少从句2.语序不对。</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human since people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, </correction>

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<error_type>主语错误,单复数错误,少介词</error_type>
<correction.s1>It reminds me that I appear differently in different place, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people set down in the island must have to search food for survive, if a certain kind of food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as such food was more and more occupied by human. </correction>

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<error_type>缺少连词</error_type>
<correction.s1> it is reminds me that I appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, but if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
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发表于 2016-1-20 20:18:59 |只看该作者
<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型(如果不知道就填不知道)</error_type>

<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
This reminds me too that I appear differently in different places.

<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>
1.不应该用分词settling,,,因为有动作即视感.2.must have searched不应该用虚拟语气..3.
For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
For example,people who settle down the island must search food to survive,if a certain food that is vital for human,and is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals,the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is increasingly occupied by human.

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句子 1  This reminds me, I appear different in different places, too.
This reminds me that I appear differently in different places as well.

句子 2  For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.

For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human, it is rightly necessary. If it is the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.

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