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美国18fall勋章 建筑18fall勋章

发表于 2017-8-30 09:33:19 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 心玉夕颜 于 2017-8-30 10:43 编辑

模考:一开始没下文就回复了,所以时间显示的有点久

The recommendation claims that college students should choose a field of study based on the availability of jobs in that field. In my opinion, this recommendation is substantial if we consider that college students should consider their future jobs and what skills and ability that jobs need so that they can study necessary subjects and abilities. However, it is too myopic to ignore other seemingly irrelevant subjects.

There is no doubt that college students should choose their major based on their dream jobs, so that they could learn all the knowledge, abilities and skills which could help them capable of their dream jobs. Nowadays, there are tens of thousands of jobs and they are divided into different fields, therefore job division become more and more detailed which means different jobs require exactly different and various abilities. As a result, job market reversely promotes college to set more department and majors to accord with their needs. Consequently, this phenomenon directly forces students to consider their dream jobs to make a choice. So, it is reliable to recommend college students to choose their major based on their dream jobs.

However, the most useful ability that college students learn in college is not knowledge but the method of studying. Every year, there are many graduates finally find a job that have little to do with their majors or even is not relevant with their majors. Graduates have to learn many new things in order to be capable of their work and tasks. In this scenario, graduates will realize that in fact, knowledge they have studied in college is useless but the way of studying they have learned in college is useful. By the efficient method of studying new knowledge and skills, they could get along with a new field of jobs as soon as possible and get rid of confusion and hesitance in workplace.

Besides, although jobs are divided into different fields, many jobs are still interrelated. For example, architects need many fields of knowledge to become eminent professional architects. Apart from those who major in architecture during undergraduate, students from other fields like engineering, science and art, could also engage in architecture because knowledge of building, structural and civil engineering and aesthetic ability is necessary for an architect.
Therefore, studying a field of study which differs with the availability of future jobs in that field is also available.

In conclusion, from what have been discussed above, college students do not necessarily need to choose a field of study based on the availability of jobs in that field. If some people haven't decided what jobs they want to engage in after graduation, they could just choose to major what they are interested in, since studying a subject you like is much more pleasant than studying a dislike.

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发表于 2017-8-30 12:28:15 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 sweepyou 于 2017-8-30 12:33 编辑

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The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

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To a limited extent, the speaker's statement that welfare is an indicator for a great country is partially correct. A strong social-welfare system is the material base for the individuals to pursue their artistic, scientific or political achievements. For a country where people remain at subsistance level, it is almost impossible for individuals to work on spiritual activities, let alone engaged in some creative field.

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However, the counterproposition is not equally correct. In many circumstances, a country with well-managed welfare system cannnot be seen as a great country. The greatness of a country is largely depended on the core value of the society.
e.g.: In some authoritarian countries, personal characteristics of intelligence may often be sacrificed for a rapid economic growth.
In Middle East, national welfare relies heavily on natural resources, while the culture is conservative and in lack of innovation.

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Furthermore, outstanding individuals themselves is an indicator for the greatness of a country.
e.g.: Some countries don't serve as a large economy, but if its individual values are highly respected.

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In other cases, a country's welfare is effected by external causes other than internal ones.
e.g.: Some European countries during World War II, the newly-founded US. A low living standard could not efface achievements in other fields, such as an art or cultural one.

In general, although most great countries maintain a higher welfare standard, welfare is not the only indicator of greatness. Meanwhile, outstanding individuals such as artists, politicians or scientists, may reflect the core value for a country, and serves an important mark for a great country.

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美国18fall勋章

发表于 2017-8-30 13:36:42 |显示全部楼层
本来一直想先写完作文issue7类再模考的,果然就拖沓了。现在直接模考issue。

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美国18fall勋章

发表于 2017-8-30 14:10:39 |显示全部楼层
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College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

In the modern market-competing world, the trend of jobs-oriented gradually exacerbate. Some one draws an claim that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. It seems like a gronded and reasonable advice, but I have some different views. From my point, whether college students should chooce the field of study based on the availability of jobs in that field depending on their personal different conditions, which including the family conditions, the interests they have, and their life pursuits.
At first, let's talk about the family conditions. For those need to support their families right after their graduation, the availabillity of jobs in the field will play an more important role than others. These students already decides to find a job to make money, so besides the salary, the extent how easy to get a job, will totallly influence their ideas of choosing study field. One of my classmates even find part-time jobs both on weekdays and weekends, thanks to the availability of tutors.
Additionly, the intersts they have may induce the students to the different field natually. Some students who have zealots in subjects will decide their study field early and steadfastly. There are scientsis calling "the organic chemistry is the most beautiful subject in the world". Like Zuckerberg who created Synapse Media Player APP in high school, decided to major in psychology and computational science. In the other hand, some students who may don't have the zealots like these, will consider the availability of jobs in the field.
Besides, their life pursuits will comes to different sides. Some prefers to continue education and pursuit higher standard objects, such even like the Nobel prize, while others will pursuit a higher salavy and the availability of jobs in the field. The later will consider the availability more and the first one will not.
In conclusion, whether choose the study field based on the availability will depends on the personal conditions, the students who need to support the families, who don't find their interests, and who don't pursuit highest standard will consider the availability of jobs more. Even they may choose these study field ultimately, we should give them advice that the most important things to get a job is not the availability of the jobs field, but the ability of themselves.

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发表于 2017-8-30 21:58:19 |显示全部楼层
要做题目了要做题目了

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发表于 2017-8-30 22:35:20 |显示全部楼层
谢谢老师!

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发表于 2017-8-30 23:33:45 |显示全部楼层
Looking for jobs is always a main duty that college students will have to deal with. The jobs graduates have taken may related to their major. To choose majors depends on availability of jobs in that field is a good choice for students to study in college. A great number of available jobs in specific fields as IT, business analyst, web page designer are needed with the development of today’s society, choosing major is a significant choice that every student should comprehensively think through and then make up their mind.

To begin with, what you have study in college will affect your job searching. Some people might say personal interests should be considered as an important point for students to choose their major. In my point of view, I would consider interests as one of the significant factors that affects students’ choosing major.  

However, with combining their own personal interests with the society’s job vacancy, will be win-win for themselves and good match for future job searching. Under the background of the Big Data Base, computer science and related jobs have a great number of vacancy nowadays. By combining students’ own interests with choosing one of those fields related majors, not only students will enjoy their personal interests but also will get decent jobs.

Further more, a significant increasing number of jobs vacancy are appearing in 21 century. Such as business analyst, wine taster, library managing and so many other jobs. Nowadays, looking for a job is not as hard as before. With the society’s muti-culturism and innovations, more and more majors are created with its needs. To combine students’ own interests with the availability of the jobs fields is not a hard thing. Students may always look for a relevant major that related to their own interests. With the students’ personal interest of painting, they will be very welcome to choose the major of designers of fashion fields if they are interested in fashion, or indoor designer if they are interests in that. As the interests of painting, a lots of related majors with availability of jobs fields are available.

Additionally, the development of our society needs alternative majors which has made some jobs have a larger needs. As one part of the society, in order to make it better and develops faster, students as the future governors should take a honorable responsibility of building it. Since this reason, the major that students choose should also meet the needs with developments.
  
In conclusion, The alternatives of major are very appealing for students, and choosing the one with the fields of job availability makes a better choice for students and motivates the development of our society as well.

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发表于 2017-8-31 23:02:26 |显示全部楼层
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Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

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As the modern society becomes increasingly dependent on a skilled and knowledgeable workforce, it is proposed that, to encourage teachers to pursue teaching excellence, their salaries should be determined according to the academic performance of their students.  I strongly disagree with this proposal as this policy will lead to serious washback effects on teaching and prevent the students from developing in a well-rounded manner.  In addition, the policy is not unfair to teachers who cannot control all the factors that influence students’ academic performance.  

If the teachers receive their salaries based on their students’ scores in the exams, it is likely that teachers will focus primarily on preparing students for the high-stake exams.  
e.g exam-oriented education

Another problem with the proposed policy is that it forces teachers to promote academic excellence among students as the only goal for education.
e.g neglect to teach moral lessons to students, which is more essential for individuals.

Some people may argue that this policy will create financial incentives for teachers to work harder to help students do well in school and tests.  

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发表于 2017-9-1 12:08:52 |显示全部楼层
我来啦~~

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发表于 2017-9-1 12:36:55 |显示全部楼层
前意识的斑点 发表于 2017-9-1 12:08
我来啦~~

Going to university plays an important role in individuals’ path. A lot of parents try to push their children to be accepted by high-rank school to secure youngsters’ future. Most individuals suggest that students should chose major, which has required a lot of workers, because, to some extent, finding a job represent success. However, from my perspective, it depends on students’ family background, interests and ability.

To begin with, for students born with silver spoon, there is no need to worried about the foreground of their majors. It is likely that their families already have a company for them to inherit. According to a recent national study from Times, around 90 percent of the family business are inherited by the youngsters in the family. Admittedly, certain majors such as arts, acting and creative majors, might not have promising future, the students might not select their major by considering major’s future.

For needy students, who are taking loans to attend school, major in promising field might be a sagacious choice. Tuition fee of universities can be a lot to a lot of indigent family. Thus, the student must shoulder the responsibility to pay for the loans after graduation. Obama, for instance, had to take out loans for law school. In fact, he finally managed to pay back his loan when he was a middle age man. Hence if the students are facing huge financial problem, finding a promising major might be a sound idea.

Some people might argue that students must select certain jobs because it is good for their future. Admittedly, some fields might require a lot of workers for now, the need of the market might change after students graduate. A future of certain field is unpredictable. Couple years ago, artificial intelligence was not a hot topic at all, but, all of sudden, it became the most promising field of computer science. Thousands of engineers want to transfer into machine learning, but it is already too late to switch. The trend of certain field changes all the time.

In conclusion, it might be better if the students chose their majors based on their family background, their interests. Forcing thoughtful students to switch into a promising major is not viable. It is highly recommended that the university provides guidance, which allows students to pursue their dream.

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发表于 2017-9-2 07:49:41 |显示全部楼层
Angelyyy 发表于 2017-8-28 20:52
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谢谢老师

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发表于 2017-9-2 08:05:32 |显示全部楼层
Angelyyy 发表于 2017-8-28 20:52
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这篇文章会写的比较有限制,
感觉自己写的时候太被框架局限,导致无法思考得更全面
我自己再练习练习

其实不同主题的Issue需要有不同的论证思路,没有办法和我们熟悉的应试教育八股文相提并论,我确实该反思一下了

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发表于 2017-9-2 22:26:53 |显示全部楼层
非常感谢

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发表于 2018-1-21 23:44:30 |显示全部楼层
谢谢分享!!!!!!

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发表于 2018-5-7 11:18:57 |显示全部楼层
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