G0602-DAWN小组专用作业大贴

bbuyyUID：2119731

win-sz 剩下的时间就咱们共同勉励了

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原帖由 win-sz 于 2006-1-4 20:57 发表
Issue88:
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Argument200:
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你的A我已经改了，也帮忙看看我的嘛，谢谢～
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bbuyyUID：2119731

win-sz 我在看你的issue88 今晚刚写的150也是科技类的高频题 也请你帮忙看看吧 希望多批评
150  "Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."


With the rapid development of televisoin and Internet, people nowadays could get information from different places easier than ever before. In my point of view, however, this is not mean that them could eventually substitute tourism.
Fisrt of all, travlling is always a effective manner for us to consolidate relationship with our family and firends, and to offer more oppotulities to make new firends, while TV and Internet could offer a little. Under a joyful circumstance, we would be more willing to communicate the deepest thought  in our mind. Thus we can have a better understanding of people around us. We can express our love to our  family and friends, and share the most enjoyful time with them. Moreover, during a trip we can meet people from different parts of the world with different cultural background. We can talk with them, share our opinions, and make new firends.
In addition, we can really get relaxation and enjoyment during a journey. Although TV and webs in the Internet may present us the most beautiful pictures, sweet sound and excellent definition,  they could ensure us to experience nothing but to imagine.  However, when we go out for a trip, we can really enjoy the charm of the nature. Standing on the top of  mountain, we can smell fresh air, see the sun rising from the orient, listen to beautiful songs sang by various birds. Lying on the sand beach, we can enjoy the sunshine, pick up various lovely shells and taste the most delicious seafood. Talking with the local residents, we can learn interesting storise and custom of them, which result in a wider eyeshot, a better understanding of their culture. As for people who interest in photography, touriam surly provides countless material for them.         
Finally, rather than hamper tourism, morden information technology has in fact promote the development of travel industry. The travelling guide programs shown in television would greatly explode people's desire for "go and see". And the internet enable us to reserve a hotel or to search effective travel agency conveniently and quickly.
In sum, travelling as an important way of entertainment in one's life could never be replaced by other forms. Because it can meet with some basic needs such as sensibility, relaxation, curiosity of humanity.

virginia730UID：208873

不好意思了,这周没来
昨天考完了公共课.下周接着考.
佩服老大

幽兮UID：2119029

快要找不到了，顶个。。。老大怎样了。。

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本周写作的大类：

issue--------艺术-------
1、艺术家 Vs 批评家 － 对立矛盾、和谐统一 、相互作用
2、艺术 Vs 社会；内容 Vs 表现形式；局部 Vs 整体
3、艺术资助：局部 Vs 整体
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issue144 - 艺术家 Vs 批评家 － 价值的创造、贡献
It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value.
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.

argument216 - 居住环境/市场推广
The following appeared in a magazine article about planning for retirement.
'Because of its spectacular natural beauty and consistent climate, Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire. As a bonus, housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and real estate taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Nevertheless, Clearview's mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. Retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of physicians in the area is far greater than the national average.'

[ 本帖最后由 win-sz 于 2006-1-10 21:31 编辑 ]

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Issue144:
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Argument216:
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[ 本帖最后由 win-sz 于 2006-1-10 22:59 编辑 ]

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issue 138 - 失败 Vs 成功 － 必要条件 － 对立统一
Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.

argument180 - 产品推销
The following is a recommendation from the personnel director to the president of Acme Publishing Company.
'Many other companies have recently stated that having their employees take the Easy Read Speed-Reading Course has greatly improved productivity. One graduate of the course was able to read a five-hundred-page report in only two hours; another graduate rose from an assistant manager to vice president of the company in under a year. Obviously, the faster you can read, the more information you can absorb in a single workday. Moreover, Easy Read costs only $500 per employee—a small price to pay when you consider the benefits to Acme. Included in this fee is a three-week seminar in Spruce City and a lifelong subscription to the Easy Read newsletter. Clearly, Acme would benefit greatly by requiring all of our employees to take the Easy Read course.'