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本帖最后由 glamorousky 于 2010-5-20 22:01 编辑

在搜索有关社会学的网站的时候发现的很成功的社会学ps,转帖过来和大家分享一下,希望对准备申请社会学这个专业的同学有所 帮助。
The statement of purpose offers you an opportunity to present your case to an admissions committee in your own words. It should provide information about the goals you have established for yourself and how these goals relate to your future career. It should describe these goals in the context of your academic, professional or personal past and could discuss those events, classes and experiences which have prepared you for graduate study in that field.
It will be to your benefit to tailor each statement to the particular school and program to which you are applying. You should discuss how your interests complement the program's faculty, resources and facilities. These essays often serve as writing samples for graduate admissions and fellowship committees. Therefore, it is very important that your statements be well planned, clearly stated, organized and in proper English.

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  Boston University Social Masters
  The rapidly growing elderly population is becoming a serious social problem in many countries. Some countries have been successful at finding solutions for this problem but others have not. Japan is one of the latter countries. Although Japan has one of the highest life expectancy rates and a reputation for good quality of life for its elderly population, it has been unsuccessful at addressing this problem. Compared to other industrialized countries, Japan lags behind in programs for elders who are physically disabled, bedridden or in need of long term care. The current economic crisis is exacerbating this situation as the government is cutting funding for elder programs. This problem resonates deeply with me, and I hope to someday work on finding a solution. It is for this reason that I am applying to the graduate program in social work at Boston University: I seek the skills and knowledge I need to return to Japan and work for a social work service.

  My interest in the elderly dates back to my childhood. Growing up with my grandparents greatly influenced my values and personality: they taught me to be self-motivated and disciplined. Their resilience and support has helped me to persevere even when confronted with seemingly insurmountable obstacles. Because of their kindness toward me I have a deep respect for them and for elderly people in general. This is what motivates me to become involved in the field of social work. Traditionally in Japanese society, the care of one's parents is believed to be the children's duty. After World War II, such traditions have evolved due to changes in family structure. No longer is the eldest child the only one to inherit his parent's property, and two-income families have become the norm. These changes have left Japanese people at a loss as to how to care for their aging parents. The current response to this problem seems to be hospitalization. Families increasingly hospitalize their elders who are physically disabled, bedridden or in need of long-term care. These individuals are usually transferred to nursing homes, but because of sparse accommodations and a one to two year wait list, they end up staying with family members who are often ill equipped to care for them. As a result, there are a number of incidences of elder abuse by family members and elder suicide. Also, there are many other elderly people who live alone--every year, many of them die with no one, not even their family members, having knowledge of their death.

  Currently there is no social welfare program in Japan that offers assistance to these elders and their families. In the light of these terrible problems, the need for such a program is obvious. My interest in social work is to find ways to develop and improve the types of services available to the elderly in Japan at a systematic level. I want to be involved in the organizing, managing, developing, shaping and planning of social policies related to the elderly. I believe the social work program at Boston University will allow me to do that. By studying macro social work at Boston University, I will learn about established social systems, assessment and intervention strategies. In addition, Boston University's emphasis on urban issues appeals to me immensely. As I will be returning to work in Osaka, the second largest city in Japan, graduate work in this area will better equip me for the challenges I will be facing. To me, an urban mission is a commitment to identify and find solutions to issues faced by urban areas. I believe I am well prepared for graduate work.

During my undergraduate study, I acquired the necessary background knowledge by taking advanced courses in the areas of psychology and sociology, including sociological research methods, social theory, statistics, psychological research, and psychotherapy. Along with these courses, I had an internship at the Asian Task Force Against Domestic Violence, a non-profit organization. I also volunteered at Sawayakaen, a nursing service, and Asunaro Children's Mental Hospital in Japan. From this internship and my volunteer work, I have gained practical experience that I feel will contribute to my academic and professional success. I expect the graduate work at Boston University to be demanding, challenging, and ultimately rewarding. I look forward to the experience from an intellectual as well as social point of view--I hope to learn and grow as an individual and a macro social worker. I hope that I will be allowed to do so at Boston University.

范文只作参考,一定要针对学校写出特色!
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太有用了 ········谢谢

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不错
期待更多的。。。。



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好东西啊,从来没见识过
理想是长在我的心里,如果我还活着,我就会永远的爱它。并且生生不息。

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发表于 2006-8-10 22:19:15 |只看该作者
感谢分享!不过有关PS的文字风格好像有与此文不同的建议,有的说短小的句子、生动的话语会比较好,是否有很多种可供选择的风格呢?

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原帖由 inasmuch 于 2006-8-10 22:19 发表
感谢分享!不过有关PS的文字风格好像有与此文不同的建议,有的说短小的句子、生动的话语会比较好,是否有很多种可供选择的风格呢?



突出自己独特的优势就好。
其实规格什么的倒是次要的.

无论你的记忆有没有回复,我们都是最好的朋友。。。

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弱弱的问
怎么收到的?
google上输什么?

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原帖由 bss 于 2006-8-12 10:42 发表
弱弱的问
怎么收到的?
google上输什么?



偶也忘了在什么地方找到的了...
许久前的事情了...
呵呵~:p

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谢谢哦

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对我的申请的方向有很大帮助阿:loveliness: :handshake
请烤鸭回来的各位板油将回忆写进  每期考试回忆贴 谢谢~~~

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回复 #1 lyhcynthia 的帖子

我也着手准备资料了。刚刚考完GT,趁着十一小憩一下。大家都加油啊!

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很受用,谢谢

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发表于 2010-8-22 03:38:31 |只看该作者
十分感谢哦!
和我本来打算的写法有些不同~
如水凉夜,卸甲素颜。

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