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不知道大家怎么觉得,我老觉得写T的这些“生活琐事”提不起劲。。因为找不到喜欢的内容来填充。也就是随便凑凑,反正凑出来也不会差。就是我自己看着恶心。。
      虽然大家说T的写作内容要求不高,写些大众化的东西即可。但是,额,也可能我对自己要求比较变态。。总希望搞点新意搞点创意,不要让考官一眼扫到几个关键词就联想到之前看过的某某某某某某某某某某某某篇文章。。。。。

      在此开个贴。主要是怕我自己偷懒。也顺便练习短时间提纲组织能力。更顺便熟悉题目。
      当然也欢迎大家来讨论~或者跟偶一起练习·~~

      总之我是一天十个题的提纲,杠上了。

      目前题目来自草木斑&glamoursky斑整理的JJ。在此感谢两位大人~

    now FIGHTING!
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【1】01/13/07: Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When talking about homework, we students may take it as usual as the daily cook of mother. So it must be an unbelievalbe piece of news for students to hear that they need not to do any homework since then. Of cuorse, this dream can never be true as far as I am concerned as I see the neccesity of both the students and parents.
1.slang of the teachers, review what we have learned and to prepare what is to learn.independedt time on thinking of the questiong vs followed the instruction of the teacher. trying to touch the boulders in the river of knowledge will let students know more about themself and arouse their interests.
2. As homework is done at home, it offers parents a time to be educated with their children and get them close to each other. own experience: doing homework with my dad. once I gave him a question I had solved and to see his funning face trying hard to solve.
however, the quantity and quality of the homework shuold be carefully controlled by, as is often the case that too much homework will get some students bored and even make them give up. also those easy ones should not be repeated. In all homework that spurs students thinking is worth assigning everyday.  those homework are like water to those plant, if the water contains the right nutrients,surely the saplings, as students, will grow pretty well. and if the water contains much more or too less nutrients, or there is no water at all, how can a sapling become a tree in the future?


【2】 01/14/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Drivers should pay a fee to be allowed to drive on the city streets during the time when there is the greatest amount of trafic. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.

Cars, from the time invented, have always take the greatest concern for many, for the simple reason that they have most thing to do with people's daily life.Every time the oil price goes up and down, people's emotion will experiece the peak and trough
as well. Then I believe if there is fee charged during those traffic hours, choas must follow nearly behind.
1. situation1: as people obey with complaint. most will be on road ahead or after, then another traffic hour is created. dilemma, another fee charged--at last charging on the whole time ---boycott by many. neither will solve the trafic problem
2.situation2: people give up cars totally. recession on the car industry, like Generall Moto now, need government aid. aids come from taxpayer who paied on the road charge. also lead to chaos.
government is not to collect money from those touching issues but try to improve it. they should come up with a better idea such as to boarden the road. As an authority that control the power over anyone decision that temperary release the burden shuold be ignored.


前两个写太多了。。时间也长了、。压缩之。

【3】 01/19/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
真难。。
most decisions are about life.
depends on the age.
1.年轻点是可能滴。父母在上,经济不独立。。
2.成年人了谁帮你。结婚自己决定,吃啥自己决定,money in our own hands, 。
3.however others view may help us to decide which is better, thus I seems like we are asking for decision, actually we are asking for an alternative for us to choose.
we hold the paddle of our own boat,and we know the boat best, we point out the destination of ourselves. others may be the lighthouse that offers coordinates rather than shortcuts.


【4】 01/26/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today's world, to speak well is more important than to write well. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
Considering that writing and speaking are both the important ways to get ourselves known by others, I had always found it hard to decide which is of greater significance until recent I heard about a story that two people seeking love with different way.
1.the person who writes a perfectly poem to show his love to the girl, at first the girl---happy and ever---the person keeps writing a poem to his girl everyday.girl thought: writing needs hand and soul work together, true love is twinkle its eye between lines. he can not say well, but he also can express well to his deepest love.
2.the person delivered a perfectly speech to ...girl---happy---harmonious, as when there is sth wrong he always knows how to change the sitution by his tongue.
In all,both important. people conclude like that --becuase they only see the money paid for a speech delivered by, say the Clinton's, or maybe they take the ability to speak well is easier to pursue. For me, both are the fundement of a better life as they reconcile our life and soul.


【5】 02/03/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can learn more from watching television than reading books. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
No
TV-mass info, no time to think critical but just accept. to know more rather than learn more.  no deep science is on TV as it is for most. Discovery, just presents the facts and lack of theory. without concentration on certein subjects.

book, reading speed is faster than speaking. allow to think and stop.concertration. and books allow your to find the path to the myth of knowledge. eg. Fermat.
in all books are rudder that provide us to lead the own way of ourselves while the TV, if learn from it, will be the wild winds blow from all direction that confuses our destination.

【6】 02/24/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
刚好写过。。偷懒。。
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【7】03/03/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are busy doing different things that they can do few things well. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.

depends on culture
1.multi--india, people all like to do different things a time, text book, during lunch time they change the topic several times without noticing and the collegues who are quite familiar with this set of thinking cooperate with the manager naturally.
2.single--America, awful to deal with several things together.
the culture has deepest root in their citizens. Thus if some one can do so many things at same time with high efficiency and quality, do not stop him, understanding the cultural differences is also what we puesue in the international economic time.


【8】 03/04/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
这个相当纠结。。

yes
1.international economic time.past we only cooperate with people of the same culture background, now so many foreign enterprises, so many people from clutures all over the world congregate for the same taget. eg, a movie, American &Japannese try to cooperate.....

2.compared with the past, the enterprise used to be small and only contain hundreds of people.today, millions.
3.less communication today..

【9】 03/10/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for a teacher try to help students to gain self-con?dence than to teach them speci?c knowledge. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
yes
1.spend most of time aweak in school. more than knowledge should they acquire there.confidence, lack, new theory even work out, maybe shame to anounce, delay in scientific development.
2.selfconfidence also mean that one is not afraid of failure and thus make more motivative to challenge the chance. Thomas Edison. Aristotle. 这例子够没劲的。。


【10】 03/23/07: Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
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要吐了。。写了一早上。。
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【1】04/21/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions
make more negative effects than positive effects on young people?s behavior. Use reasons and
speci?c examples to support your answer.
no
1.movie & program checked in many different departments before release.
that's why different levels of movies and rules made to eleminate the negtive effect at most
<harry potter> cut down some of the parts, and also categrate it into violent movie.
2.parents take carefully control.research years of understanding, parents should know it and

control the remote and know about the videos their children are watching.thus positive of
those boarden views and entertaining will be the only subjects.

【2】 04/29/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know
events happening around the world, though sometimes they are unlikely to affect your daily
life. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
yes.
1.help get better understanding of what we pursued. Iraq, sheos to Bush, Consititution.
2.may not affect in a short time,but if long? when the Remanbrother's went bankrupt, nothing.

later, price of petro drops with the stocks. if had a lot in hand, loss.
international economic time, everything is connected like a butterfly effect.


【3】05/18/07: Is it better to spend money on something that lasts long time, such as an
expensive piece of jewelry, or spend on something that provides a short-term pleasure, such as
a vacation?
depends
1.to show permenant love for woman, a jewelry will she like to wear always will be the best

present, as it is not only an orment but also a kind of respect,loyalty and all the good
feelings.
2.to show love for man, an unforgettable vocation will be a better choice. man values memory

for most of time.

【4】 05/19/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid
as much as doctors, lawyers, and business leaders. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support
your answer.
1/sounds reasonalbe: work for the future of others
2.not practical:money paid come from government,the same as doctors. but the lawyers and

leaders are eating what they harvest themselves.  doctors less, too many teachers.
trying to improve, but may not be equal.


【5】 06/24/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to ?nish a
project and then start another than to ?nish two projects at the same time. Use speci?c
reasons and examples to support your answer.
depends people
agent, limited time of both, same difficult
1. one:concentrate better quallity for most.
2.two: if stuck another way to jump out of the circle and take the idea of another project


【6】 06/30/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Letting a friend make a
mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship. Use speci?c
reasons and examples to support your answer.
No,especially close friends.
1.friends who know there is to be disaster but do not mention it is obviously not sincere

enough to be called as friends.
2.true friends always say words may destroy friendship as they are truly considering us.

Shrek, cheat later know each other better.

【7】 07/07/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University students
should be required to take basic science classes even they are not part of the ?eld of the
study. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
yes
1.know where their intersts lies from these subjects. as the first year of colledge is to find

the position.  e.g transfer major
2.boarden their view of doing a major subjects. chemical--geophysics, provide another way of

thinking
3.to get better understanding of what is going on with this world.  economic-now resession,

biology- what happens in our body.

【8】 07/14/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to truly
understand event, we must get news from newspaper; television cannot provide enough
information. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
1.true must get from newspaper, editors ideas are presented for us. and more details are

shown. allaws time to think ourselves.
2.wrong not enough info. TV news are only contained of summery of facts and stories. only some

of the events is chosen to make a detailed report. them provide too much info that we have to
time to think over, they already rewed by a new pile.

【9】07/21/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern society has
become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and
organize. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your
answer.

yes

1.future work needs.
researchers, organiaze prcesures, strategies. business, plan the sells.service, organize how

to do it good and in an ordered way.
1.5 at last, all maybe leader oneday.
2.study needs. without studying strategy, hard to learn.


【10】 07/28/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In university,
students should take the history courses no matter what ?eld they study in. Use speci?c
reasons and examples to support your answer.
1.spurred by heros in the past.
2.history of major subjects give original power to discover the facts. interesting in study.
3.ehance moral beauty.
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【1】08/04/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The next twenty years
from now on, students will not use printed books any more. Use speci?c
reasons and examples to support your answer.

no
may be replaced by elctronic books, but
1.the copyright of books will not be controlled
2.the amount of present existing book, especially general science books can be used for years
3.physical stucture of human, not suitable for concentrating on screen. smell/touching of books makes one happy.....


【2】 08/11/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The only effective way
to encourage energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and
electricity. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.

no, only increase will not be effective
1.both are so escential to daily life. waste a lot more to show dissatisfaction of public.
2.although increased, people still do not how to conserve.e.g coals to replace light, another kind of waste also pollution.
--better to build some energy conservation station. and educate public of how to do it.
build water recycle system in residense, podcast how to reuse waste.


【3】 08/17/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from
older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. Use
speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.

not exactly
1.old friends- generation gap. mature.
2.friends ar my age-- without gap.
in this way personal problem--boyfriend---same age
            life decision ---marry who --- aging one.


【4】 08/25/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools,
universities and colleges should spend less time teaching  about general
subjects and spend more time teaching about preparing for future career and
jobs. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.
no
1.high scholl, aiming for higher education, basic science is what they should well prepared
2.college.1-2years, get to know what career they would like to choose. best provide more to give them more choices.
3.last years. decide which career to take, offer jobs but not replace, as some is a mixture into their major or life help them to take another look of their major.


【5】09/08/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A teacher's ability to
relate well with students is more important than to give them knowledge. Use
speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.

yes
1.to give knowlege is also a way to relate to students. cooperate with each other well, high efficiency.
2.students should learn more than knowledge. spend more time in school, teachers, if related well can help in the aspect of sycology.


【6】 09/12/07: Should people be allowed to use mobile phones in public transportation or not?
Why? Use speci?c reasons and details to develop your essay.

yes
1.theft and robbery often occur in pubic transportation. mobile phones can act as a weapon(brick) and a way to call for others' help
2.convenient way to deliver messages
transportation,reading,listening music allowed. emergency,low voice is acceptable.
in all, not prohibit cell but restrain the decible they make when making phone calls.


【7】09/15/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Having a job to work
with other people is better than having a job to work alone. Use speci?c reasons
and examples to support your answer.

depends
1.work together-- ur place can be replaced. together takes the risks and share the money. more confident. but volunteer work can not be figureed out. some may rely to others.滥竽充数
2.alone ---- take the risk alone and thus work more carefully. the work is well done, if, praised.  train for oneself.  the position can not replaced by. the work of chief or CEO, decide and work by themselves, high salary


【8】 09/22/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Extended family is not
as important as it was in the past. Use speci?c reasons and examples to
support your answer.

yes

1.for children. more to play with, share emotion with. but replaced by TV and internet.
2.however.governmence.  population, too much, restrained to extend. tuition fee too high, lack of money to give child a bright future.wife work-to just feed one child, no enough time play with,take care of so many children.
not important but can not afford, by the planet and the parents.


【9】 09/29/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly
relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use speci?c reasons and
examples to support your answer.
no
1.alone, calm down but also can make one drown in the work, not exactly diversion.
2.with friends. talking about many makes to think on other things. laugh together relaxed the most.


【10】10/17/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University should
require their students to take at least one course teaches them the culture of a
country other than their own. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support
your answer.

yes
1.international economy environment. know better and do better. customs to deal with differnt people
2.campare with own, know more about self, and thus know how to improve.
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前两天有事,今天一口气把07年的结束 *_*

发现偶只能短时间举2理由的死穴。。虽然完全有能力填充到300甚至更多。。(开头结尾很好的浪费地方。。)总觉得。。额。。可能还是有点不好?。。但是经常2个理由一写写high的经历。。。
how to improve?....

剩下的晚上再写。。暂时休息。。
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【11】 10/20/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important
spending time working at jobs than being with families. Use speci?c reasons
and examples to support your answer.

no
1.family, who can help to comfort the trifles at work.
2.work, more money, high stress, lovely dish of lover
sub-health due to stress and overwork,old parents wait a month for one day reunion.
say,80 yers life.60nowork. the last 20years with lovers. spend on job the last 20years with whom?


【12】 10/27/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Observation or studying
animals can help us to human nature. Use speci?c reasons and examples to
support your answer.
yes
1.improve life     excellent art work of nature.   sonar--dophin, plane-bird.
2.to know about past and predict future.      Foraminifera.有孔虫。


【13】10/28/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be
paid according to the performance of their students. Use speci?c reasons and
examples to support your answer.

no
1.performance is not all students acquired.  moral& physical both important. suicide ....
if only performance. omit other aspects, pile with work
2.not all at the same level. ignore the progress but only focus the result may be bad for students.


【14】 11/03/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who do not work
because they have enough money are rarely happy. Use speci?c reasons and
examples to support your answer.

1.entired people.
2.happiness is not only come from work and money. freedom they enjoy, follow heart.
-找范文。。
不会。。


【15】11/11/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People will spend less
time in cooking or preparing food in twenty years than nowadays. Use speci?c
reasons and examples to support your answer.

yes
1.preparing. buy-internet washing and chopping- before buying it. do all except cook it in our pot. condiments paired.
2.time consuming in buying it.
3.microwave, electric-magnetic oven.compare cookstove. lower energy efficiency


【16】12/01/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should pay to
use public transportation. Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your
answer.

yes
1.energy costs. salary of people who work for it.
government pay for the construction fee, and the consume of energy shuold be paid or more money will be charged in other way, say, tax.
no pay nogain.....
不会。。!
范文起。。


【17】12/08/07: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertisements waste
money and time of companies because consumers know what they want to buy.
Use speci?c reasons and examples to support your answer.

1.tv station rely on the fee company pay on ads.
2.new products, whithout ads, no one really want to buy it.also ads effect. comsumers are tend to influence by ads according to some research.


【18】12/10/07: Do you think life is easier and more comfortable today rather than the days
when your grandparents were children? Use speci?c reasons and examples to
support your answer.

yes
1.cars
2.cells
3.internet.
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本帖最后由 ddcmj519 于 2009-2-18 13:02 编辑

昨天打不开额。。
过了下综合写作,总结换了个地方贴~
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-918794-1-1.html

and从阅读里揪了几篇资料性质的东西。
看等会儿有不有时间贴上来·
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感谢两位大人的支持哇~
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举2理由未必是弱点。版上有些结构有特色的习作,点击版头上的精华自己看。至于对你自己的水准而言是否是弱点,还是要看看你的习作才能判断。能否自己挑一篇习作,找你人为你在考场上能写出来的水准。

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这仨是小组作业,俺都掐着时间写的。考场上的话估计就是会出现些个拼写错误。。其他我觉得都还行的。
不过现在弱项是学生、老师话题。找不到例子- -!所以这两天跑去看资料了。。
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话说我从来都是两点呃 因为字太多了 说三点就要500+了 时间不允许

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