请帮忙看下这个VISA 申请信有啥要改的？
老感觉有一些有语病Dear Visa Officer,
For the reason that I would like to have a visit to my“dreamlands” – Paris,
Nice and Munich as well as visit my best friend XXduring 2010 Chinese Spring Festival,
I apply for this Schengen Visa on January
2010. However, my friend XX,
who is studyingin a college of Nice, forgot to provide me the scanned copy of her passport,
also formal visa invitation lacks.
As aresult, I choose the Purposeof travel for “Individual Tourism”.
What is more, I am the legal man and general managerof “XXXXXXXXXX”,
hence I ignore “working certificate original &translation”.
Sorry for my carelessness for preparing the visa in such a shorttime.
If there is any need, I could provide working certificate as soon aspossible via EMS or FAX.
Warm Regards,
XXXX
2 FEB 2010
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sorry for my carelessness for preparing the visa in such a shorttime.
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