rock5758 发表于 2010-3-20 11:50:29

issue130,第一篇继续高人指点。。。附加题目理解问题


这是我的提纲,对于题目issue130 HOW 的理解我一直存在疑问,是怎样,还是程度(小宝的提纲).我个人偏向前者。


一、孩子出生时无知和恐惧,他们学习文化和生存的方式——社会化。 但是社会史复杂变化的,充满了各种因素,孩子们不同的avenues 导致不同的结果。
二、诚然,当今的社会不断在进步,我们的技术革命和创新正使我们以史无前例地速度向更高的文明迈进(爱因斯坦相对论改变我们的认知,工业革命)
三.但是,不可否认的是我们的教育依然存在许多问题,由于缺少法律的了解,和接触过多暴力的影视和书籍==>青少年犯罪




我第一次写,很没底,谢谢大家的指点·····感激不尽。。。。




It is true that to be pillars of society is the wish of parents, teachers , even the country, for children. When it comes to the relation of destiny and socialization of children, and the avenues to raise children to better the society, there are various opinions existing among the masses. Admittedly, some people assert that socialization has nothing with the destiny and don not approve the second claims of the issue. Nevertheless, as far as I am considered, how children are socialized determines the destiny and we need to put forward a more effective methods to better society indeed.

Fist of all, equal to every infant, we are born with nothing but fear and ignorance to the new world. Naturally, while growing up, children are gradually to learn the culture and how to live within it, which is called socialization. So it is doubtless that being cooperative and communicative is helpful to adjust themselves to the complex society. Cooperation and communication is becoming the theme of the world., when confronting the common challenges and difficulties related with the destiny of society. Several months ago, the U.N climate change conference held in Cobenhagen is a try to solve the global warming, which is a reflect of communication and cooperation. The society, however, is full of uncertain factors and changing all the time, which might leads the children to be troubled in the dangerous situation. The conditions, if any, results from unhealthy surroundings In short, how children are socialization are responsible for the destiny of society, regress or progress.

Consider the second claim that we
have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society. Admittedly, the unprecedented prosperity is taking place all over the world due to the giant improvements in science and technology. Einstein, the greatest scientists in 20th, put forwarded the theory of relativity, which throughly changed the cognition of the humans. Additionally, during the Industrial Revolution, James Watt designed the steam engine and because of the invention, the society created a new era. All mentioned above are only a few incidents which make contributions to the progress of society. All in all, we have get large achievements in the history of humans that is attributed to cultivations for children.

However, we cannot ignore that there are many serious problems in the education of  children, which inhibits the development of children in the correct obit. In the event, the hope to better the society is illusory. Undoubtedly, for children with little self-control and knowledge of laws, they are easy to do something wrong without the supervision from others. The amount of teenagers committing crimes are raising constantly, which is harmful to the society. Simply looking at the seeds will leads its eventually turning dust; it must be put into earth in order to sprout for it. ana
The seed is to earth what education is to children. In short, we still should do more to ameliorate the education systems indeed, and only in the avenue can we raise children to bring about a better society.

In sum, I strong agree with that how children are socialized determined the destiny of society. However, even though the current education system do make contributions to the progress of society, we must confront the shortage of the education and spare no effort to better society by ameliorating the education.

rock5758 发表于 2011-12-3 06:40:22

在LA看之前自己的记录。。。没有人看过。。。
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