已知和未知 发表于 2011-10-18 16:30:36

作文交流贴 ISSUE 20---第一次写作以及心得兼求拍

感觉作文刚开始要列出几点赞同和反对原来论点的理由,观点尽量多,不要自我审查。
然后要确定自己的立场,标记第一步写的理由,为正理由或者负理由。这样有利于写的时候的查找。
写作的时候我犯了个错误,也就是第一段墨迹半天,下次刚开始不写第一段。
求指导。
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ISSUE 20
20) Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
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Do students need to choose a field of study based on the interest of their own or just the availability of the jobs?though, to much extent, getting a job after graduation to support oneselves as well as the family is the responsibility as an adult,I do agree with the former one.
I concede that one of the aims to study a field is to get a job, which would be the necessary step to utilise our ability learned through education.what's more, i also agree that some field of study would not be so attactive as others to many companies, we may take biology in china for example, the students who study biology would find it is not easy to get a job according to the unsophiscated industry in china.however it does not necessarily mean that we should choose a field of study based on availability of the jobs.
My first contention with the latter idea would be based on the old saying in china: interest is the best teacher.through the learning on the genius like newton in phisics,pauling in chemistry,we would conclude that people who concentrates on the subject he/she interested, they can make a difference by hardwork.in other words, they can acquire big success and fame as well as jobs of course,attribute to their interests.
secondly,according to my knowledge, it hard to tell whether the fields of study are attractive to job markets. we may take technology for example.in the ancient time of china , the science and technology would be not so popular as they are today.because in that time, there are no industries to attract the young,in strong contrast to the europe.but it is well known that  students who study science and technology are more easily get a job than other majors due to the booming industry in china nowadays. moreover,several years ago , the computer science are quite popular among the university and job market,due to the broken of the IT bubble,the job need for the field of computer science shrinked.we may jump to the conclusion that,it is not wise to follow the populace, because it is hard to identiy the availability of jobs,and it is wise to follow your heart considering talents and intersts when choosing a field of study.
in sum,it hard to identiy the availability of jobs on the field we are studying,and interest is the best teacher leading us to success,we should follow our heart,choose a field of study considering our own talents and intersts other than the availability of jobs in that field.
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