当一篇A中找到的问题很多大家怎么处理的呀？
不好意思 可能是快考了 有点焦虑 问题比较多这个问题一直很是困扰我~
有些时候，不怕找不到问题 就怕找到的问题太多，想扔掉几个，觉得单凭剩下的没有说服力，想合并一些，觉得会使文章显得空洞，develop不够到位， 都写，这个限时肯定不可行
比如
A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
Homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last year that region experienced twenty days with below-average temperatures, and local weather forecasters throughout the region predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years. Furthermore, many new homes have been built in this region during the past year. Based on these developments, we predict a large increase in the demand for heating oil. Therefore, we recommend investment in Consolidated Industries, one of whose major business operations is the retail sale of home heating oil. 恩 有一个同样的帖子 不过还是望有人再指点
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