木木的作业贴---issue习作贴
昨天发的帖子，结果作文没有写完，然后被删掉了。今天写完之后再发的，望通过。题目的昨天的，第一次写，自己修改了好几遍，还是感觉很挫，望各位多多指教 26 The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
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虽然我们的父辈比我们生活的艰苦,他们的意志以及自立能力比我们要强,但是我们现在自理能力变弱并不是因为生活方便了,而是因为父母的溺爱.如果没有父母的溺爱,即使是生活在很富足的家庭中,依然会很自立.
日本的父母很善于教育自己的子女,他们舍得让子女吃苦,通过让子女经历各种苦痛艰辛,锻炼他们的意志以及自理能力.通过这样的教育,孩子们拥有很强的意志,而且自立能力也有很大的提高.
我们的意志弱,自理能力差,不是因为生活的富足造成的,我们可以通过参加一些活动,例如军训来锻炼自己的意志,增强自立的能力.
The contemporary life has brought numerous conveniences to us. We can manage our work with the help of computer much easier than before. We can take buses to school instead of walking. We can communicate with our friends through the Internet. Although we are living in a word which brings us countless conveniences, it is not the reason why one is weaker and less independent.
It is parents’ lavishing of too much care that makes teenagers become weak and dependent. We can see that our previous generation is tougher than us. Maybe you will say that's because they live in poor times. However, some children born in wealthy families are strong and independent. They are able to suffer without complaining even though they have easier access to the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life. In contrast, some children who were born in poor families cannot bear any hardship. By comparison, we can find out that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life is not the condition under which one will be weak and dependent. In fact it is parents’ lavishing of love makes teenagers become so.
Parents in Japan are good at educating their children. They are willing to keep their children suffering some hardship through which improving their volition and independence. So even the living standard has been greatly improved in recent years, the teenagers in Japan are still strong and independent. Therefore, it is wrong to say that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
From what we are discussing above, we can know that it is not the conveniences of modern life that lead us to be weak and dependent. Thus, we can steel our will power and practice self-reliance by attending some activities such as military training. In my university, military training is required for every student. Sometimes we have to attend the training under the broiling sun. After three weeks hard training, freshmen learn how to fold their quilts into cubes; even the one born with a silver spoon in his mouth can finish the task well. Thus we can say that attending some activities can contribute to the strong volition and independence of the students despite of living under the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life.
In conclusion, the conveniences of the modern life can’t prevent teenagers being strong and independent because those who were born in wealthy families can suffer pains and be independent.
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