shulammite的作文贴 求板砖狠拍
第一次作文8月28日
issue1.
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
argument73.
The following appeared on the Mozart School of Music Web site.
"The Mozart School of Music should be the first choice for parents considering enrolling their child in music lessons. First of all, the Mozart School welcomes youngsters at all ability and age levels; there is no audition to attend the school. Second, the school offers instruction in nearly all musical instruments as well a wide range of styles and genres from classical to rock. Third, the faculty includes some of the most distinguished musicians in the area. Finally, many Mozart graduates have gone on to become well-known and highly paid professional musicians."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
求狠拍！！！
本帖最后由 junanita 于 2012-8-29 19:29 编辑
亲，我给你改完了，但是肿么添加不了附件呢....快教教我 8月29日 issue+argument
本帖最后由 Basilisk 于 2012-8-30 06:40 编辑
看了你的issue。汗阿。。。lz你标点之后不空格吗。。。
句子有不少不通顺。感觉整个句式都很中式英语，有的句子语法不对。
你一段是开始论证还是只是起头？你的观点在哪里？
你的第二段。。。擦汗。。。
calculating的例子正用又反用。那你的观点呢？
Issue 1我也刚写过，帮我改改吧，谢了。 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1436125-1-2.html 亲 终于可以传附件了~
这是修改后的~
大家一起加油啊！ revised by minerva. 祝好！
有时间，麻烦改下我的ARGU，谢谢~
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