炽凌锋的GREISSUE作业贴——关于技术与人类思维的文章
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Last summer vocation, Ireturned to my hometown for visiting my grandparents and taught，in the meantime, my nephew mathematics, which he failed in primaryschool. I found he tried to solve even the easiest addition operation like 78plus 234 by calculator. Responding my question that “why not get result byyourself”, he said it was unnecessary to work out the answer when calculatorwas obviously accurate. Here is the question: Does the dependence on technologyto solve problem attribute to the deterioration of the ability of human to thethink for themselves?
It is seemingly authenticthat people are more shortsighted and slow-witted with the development oftechnology. By the assistance of high tech, pursuit of material satisfaction isso filled with human’s heart that reflection inside become a kind of luxury. Athreat of nuclear weapon become a way by which powerful nation deprive moreeconomic and political benefit of weak ones. The expansion of city results inthe diminishment of animal habitat. The inordinate exhaust emission ascribe tothe severe problem of atmosphere. Without any awareness and regret, people aredepraving, mentally in particular, by technology to some extent.
However, it is hardly toneglect the benefit from advantage of technology to humans’ realization ofthemselves. The unbelievable magic of technology brings to human theimprovement of life quality such as the higher education and more integralmedical equipment. Compared to our ancestors in Neolithic who always worryabout where to find food tomorrow, humans are absolutely capable of focusingenergy on thinking what is the really need of heart and how to shape ourbehavior according to the call from the deepest bottom of our heart. Moreover,internet and artificial intelligence provide us with so accessible approach toenrich one’s inner world. With this abundance, human is inclined to discovertheir view of world and life which plays a significant role on one’s moralintegrity.
Indeed, human relytechnology to solve lots of problems, but there are always divergence whichbeyond the ability of technology. Even though the most marvelous technologycould exert least positive effect on dissolving the strife, particularly, theconflict between several different cultures, the gap between wealth andpoverty, and the racial and sexual discrimination. In contrast, technologyprobably intensifies the contradiction. Radical, for example, who decide toexecute bombing attack, avoided the train station inspection byhigh-liquid-concentration technology. Consequently, a large number of innocentpeople in train died in the attack and the strife is precipitated. In order toresolve the contradiction, lots of people, who commiserate the sufferingothers, would learn to introspect themselves and tolerate with each other. Inthis sense, the ability of people to think is hardly to be deteriorated andprobably, with profoundly conscious of the significance of peace, be improved.
In summary, in general myperspective is that technology could contribute to our ability to contemplatementally if we utilize it appropriately. After all, modern society will bedifficult to develop without modern high tech and spiritual cultivation ofhuman own
本帖最后由 炽凌锋 于 2012-9-13 21:21 编辑
自己顶 主要是想请教一下，这种写法可不可行，而且似乎论证方式有些弱…… 本帖最后由 炽凌锋 于 2012-9-13 21:21 编辑
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提纲如下：
1.技术的确会降低人的思维能力，人们会利用技术追求物质利益而忽略了内心世界
2.然而，技术会给人的思维能力带来好处，比如提供了更好的教育与医疗技术，使得人们可以专注于思考内心世界，同时技术可以提供给我们渠道去丰富自我
3.技术无法解决许多问题，比如文化纷争，而且有可能加剧矛盾，此时就需要人们用自己的包容心和同情心来解决问题，再次层面上人们对内心的思考能力提高了。
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