写作互改小分组
开个贴 发一个....evangelinsta 发表于 2012-10-9 19:08 static/image/common/back.gif
dear zulu~我要改你的这篇文章么?因为上次发完我的文章之后就没人搭理我了。我以为over了呢,这么说难道是 ...
改呗,就这一篇吧,我不是帮你改了Argu吗? evangelinsta 发表于 2012-10-10 20:34 static/image/common/back.gif
写得真好!请验收!楼主应该找一个同一level的改作文较为合适……各种赧然啊
谢谢 学习了 补充一下To sum up, the speaker I merely approve art must be understandable when it comes to novels . 应该改成 I merely approve of the claimer's assertion that art must be understandable when it comes to novels
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