[Manifest Destiny]寄托官方GRE八月组 7.22 AW作业-Argument 14
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Argument 14
The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine.
"A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep the executives need and the success of their firms. Of the advertising firms studied, those whose executives reported needing no more than 6 hours of sleep per night had higher profit margins and faster growth. These results suggest that if a business wants to prosper, it should hire only people who need less than 6 hours of sleep per night."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
从今天开始我们加强限时吧~
Argument限时 45min
Submit Deadline 7.22 23:00
Revise Deadline 7.23 23:00
望大家严格遵守提交和修改时间
作业以word文档的形式上传,直接交到帖子里。命名格式为 “Issue/Argument 题号 个人ID”。修改的作业,以回复互改同学的形式贴出来。
上个星期有新的同学要加入我们互改小组了,这次分组还是以之前的同学为主,新同学将作文交上之后再分组吧~
分组:
Janecoconut 糖甜甜
yinghuochongfei HOMIE
llsss_1234 workhard/
rita2525 joycedeverno
苇上风F dula55
HANgre asterzxj
Maxfeburarybird Irene1084
罗米_ruc 善梦斋
本帖最后由 Irene1084 于 2013-7-23 21:12 编辑
沙发!!欢迎panda回归~
7.22 Argument 14
二鸟君,我是不会坦白我这篇写超时了的……
我40分钟内写完了,瞟了一眼题发现,尼玛看错了呃!!之前没看到是advertising firms!! 把这些executives当成普通公司负责advertising的了……{:b_0023:}
于是删掉一个论点,几乎重写的,而且你应该还能看出有个地方是生生从一个点拆成两个点的。。。
狠拍吧……辛苦了……对不住啊……
To: Max Argument 14 已改~
本帖最后由 MaxFeburarybird 于 2013-7-22 20:07 编辑
Irene1084 发表于 2013-7-21 09:30 static/image/common/back.gif
沙发!!欢迎panda回归~
板凳
hand in homework!!!
revise homework for Irene~~~
{:t_0035:}
本帖最后由 HANgre 于 2013-7-22 21:35 编辑
2013-7-22-Argument 14
本来好开心今天55min就写完了,但....原来今天限时到45min了....
{:jump:}
本帖最后由 workhard/ 于 2013-7-22 22:57 编辑
浓缩的都是精华。。。 40min
lls辛苦了~ Irene1084 发表于 2013-7-21 22:30 static/image/common/back.gif
沙发!!欢迎panda回归~
哇哈哈 大家写得如火如荼啊~ HANgre 发表于 2013-7-21 22:51 static/image/common/back.gif
o, my!!
速速写起来啊 workhard/ 发表于 2013-7-21 22:53 static/image/common/back.gif
刚想问明天还要写作文不。。。
默契啊 盼盼,俺出差回来啦,把俺加进去吧{:baitun:} mark,今儿晚写! pandali 发表于 2013-7-21 23:34 static/image/common/back.gif
速速写起来啊
我没法打卡。具体情况见这个帖子
所以,我估计要一致保持刺眼的0%打卡率了......
but, 不要t我出组织!我有单独开贴打卡的。
ps. 原来高级会员可以+4分了耶!开心
{:rose:}
workhard/ 发表于 2013-7-21 22:53 static/image/common/back.gif
刚想问明天还要写作文不。。。
到7.31都是每天1篇的节奏。 热烈欢迎领导回归。
Pandali英明神武,千秋万代,一统江湖! Steven_Gao 发表于 2013-7-21 23:40 static/image/common/back.gif
盼盼,俺出差回来啦,把俺加进去吧
ok~ 本帖最后由 yinghuochongfei 于 2013-7-22 21:50 编辑
哇~~欢迎panda回归!
交作业~~一天一篇的节奏真心像打仗一样呀!!{:zhuiwei:}
先谢过partner了~~辛苦了!{:rose:} {:rose:}
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