陈圣元 发表于 2013-10-5 14:25:57

求改一篇小短文

Opinion polls in China in the past year have  listed the country's higher education as one of the three major targets of growing public discontent ,with increasingly difficult for university graduates to find jobs in recent years who used to be highly esteemed and never worry about employment.In light of this,Ministry of Education officials in charge of student affairs advise that university graduates should be prepared to compete with "ordinary laborers" in the job market,while critics have  concluded that the whole of China's higher-education system is problematic, from students' admission, to their education, to their graduation.The strict unified entrance  exam has been severely blamed for being only good at enrolling bookworms and creating inequality and injustice, the employment crisis has been reprobated for many majors that are not demanded in job market, the university education scheme fails to reach neither the needs of industrial nor specialist requirement ,and the financial input in education is poorly shortage 。To facilitate genuine progress ,the government needs to launch a thorough restructuring of the system.
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