小硕鼠 发表于 2014-8-13 16:31:50

【寄托八月组】作文互改8.14-8·15- I22A8(已更新分组信息)

本帖最后由 小硕鼠 于 2014-8-15 07:53 编辑

题目采用AW高频。


八月组每两天一次小组作业互评。参加互改鼓励不强制,请量力而行,保证写作和互评质量。

时间说明:8.14晚23点结束占座,并且用附件上传自己的习作,并附上方便大家讨论的大纲总结,回复互评伙伴楼层完成互评,8.15早上来看分组信息,请注意,如果只占座不上传习作,我会把上传习作的分组,未上传的分组。或者可与互评伙伴协调好互评时间。欢迎在楼内各种讨论分享,秉承小组共享互助宗旨,有拖延不改的欢迎发帖或私信举报,情节严重永久封杀ID

分组信息:
Ninalala3333与glorialulu互批习作
xjq194949与VampireYI互批习作
longlongblack与Emerald互批习作
david-ding与liliudodo互批习作

22) Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.


8) The following appeared in a memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham College.
To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current trends, will double over the next 50 years, thus making existing dormitory space inadequate. Moreover, the average rent for an apartment in our town has risen in recent years. Consequently, students will find it increasingly difficult to afford off-campus housing. Finally, attractive new dormitories would make prospective students more likely to enroll at Buckingham.

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
占座ddl:8.14晚23点 互评ddl:8.15晚24点

liliudodo 发表于 2014-8-13 17:06:57

sahua

Ninalala3333 发表于 2014-8-13 21:52:48

本帖最后由 Ninalala3333 于 2014-8-13 23:40 编辑

banden~

速度真的是硬傷。。。最後一秒剛剛finish...

glorialulu 发表于 2014-8-13 23:08:07

本帖最后由 glorialulu 于 2014-8-14 21:23 编辑

issue 又没在30min内写完,真是太沮丧了,总感觉有好多要说,又不知道怎么说,这个感觉太不爽了!

xjq194949 发表于 2014-8-13 23:31:24

本帖最后由 xjq194949 于 2014-8-14 22:21 编辑

机器里没有word..请尽量直接修改..最后导出为pdf格式..谢谢

VampireYI 发表于 2014-8-13 23:52:42

本帖最后由 VampireYI 于 2014-8-14 22:24 编辑

占座

longlongblack 发表于 2014-8-13 23:58:49

本帖最后由 longlongblack 于 2014-8-14 10:35 编辑






占座

Emerald 发表于 2014-8-14 11:21:55

本帖最后由 Emerald 于 2014-8-14 16:48 编辑

占座

考试要这样就可以吊颈都得

liliudodo 发表于 2014-8-14 21:03:58

liliudodo 发表于 2014-8-13 17:06 static/image/common/back.gif
sahua

aw31m,issue55m大神们尽管鄙视我吧

david-ding 发表于 2014-8-14 21:39:12

今天Issue好难写..role model我就当popular star写了,要不实在没法扯..

david-ding 发表于 2014-8-14 21:42:23

xjq194949 发表于 2014-8-13 23:31 static/image/common/back.gif
机器里没有word..请尽量直接修改..最后导出为pdf格式..谢谢

装个office吧..Mac也好Linux也好

xjq194949 发表于 2014-8-14 21:50:41

david-ding 发表于 2014-8-14 21:42 static/image/common/back.gif
装个office吧..Mac也好Linux也好

说实话我装了....昨天的一拖进去就让我选择编码.中文编码都试过了也没见能读出来的..用了其他软件才看到..虽然还是有很多乱码..囧

xjq194949 发表于 2014-8-14 21:54:26

本帖最后由 xjq194949 于 2014-8-14 22:22 编辑

david-ding 发表于 2014-8-14 21:42 static/image/common/back.gif
装个office吧..Mac也好Linux也好

说实话我装了.. 兼容性实在是不行..昨天的一拖进去就让我选择编码.中文编码都试过了也没见能读出来的..用了其他软件才看到..虽然还是有很多乱码..囧

david-ding 发表于 2014-8-14 22:58:17

xjq194949 发表于 2014-8-14 21:54 static/image/common/back.gif
说实话我装了.. 兼容性实在是不行..昨天的一拖进去就让我选择编码.中文编码都试过了也没见能读出来 ...

..你装个虚拟机吧

glorialulu 发表于 2014-8-15 13:05:02

Ninalala3333 发表于 2014-8-13 21:52 static/image/common/back.gif
banden~

速度真的是硬傷。。。最後一秒剛剛finish...

改好了,一点建议,加油:lol
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