【寄托八月组】作文互改8.16-8·17- I36A9（更新分组）
本帖最后由 hj1313 于 2014-8-17 01:17 编辑题目采用AW高频。
八月组每两天一次小组作业互评。参加互改鼓励不强制，请量力而行，保证写作和互评质量。
时间说明：8.16晚23点结束占座，并且用附件上传自己的习作，并附上方便大家讨论的大纲总结，回复互评伙伴楼层完成互评，8.17早上来看分组信息，请注意，如果只占座不上传习作，我会把上传习作的分组，未上传的分组。或者可与互评伙伴协调好互评时间。欢迎在楼内各种讨论分享，秉承小组共享互助宗旨，有拖延不改的欢迎发帖或私信举报，情节严重永久封杀ID
互评分组：
glorialulu & 丁叮呀哦
liliudodo & emilie1027
VampireYI & echohoho
david-ding & simbaqiao
I39： College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
A9： Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
占座ddl：8.16晚23点； 互评ddl：8.17晚24点
本帖最后由 glorialulu 于 2014-8-16 15:00 编辑
本帖最后由 丁叮呀哦 于 2014-8-16 21:00 编辑
占座！ 占座 本帖最后由 VampireYI 于 2014-8-16 22:58 编辑
占座
占座～ 卡时间是另一种痛苦... liliudodo 发表于 2014-8-16 07:52 static/image/common/back.gif
占座
先传一篇吧
本帖最后由 emilie1027 于 2014-8-17 17:15 编辑
已上传argument和issue。issue写的时间较长且烂，求狠批。liu的argu已修改
占 占座 我只练ISSUE， 今天我会发两篇 一篇活动要求的 一篇自己写的 请hj1313帮忙啦~
丁叮呀哦 发表于 2014-8-15 22:04 static/image/common/back.gif
占座！
请问你的argument呢？为什么是两个issue
glorialulu 发表于 2014-8-17 14:09 static/image/common/back.gif
请问你的argument呢？为什么是两个issue
不好意思，我就写了一个issue没来的急写argument 丁叮呀哦 发表于 2014-8-17 15:16 static/image/common/back.gif
不好意思，我就写了一个issue没来的急写argument
没关系，我改好了，一点个人意见，加油哟 glorialulu 发表于 2014-8-17 16:08 static/image/common/back.gif
没关系，我改好了，一点个人意见，加油哟
谢谢哦，实话说你的作文真的是范例级别的，我学习了好多，也有点儿小疑问写在文章中了，希望不介意哈！