懒得哥 发表于 2014-8-25 22:32:09

Argu.1 第一次写求点评

本帖最后由 懒得哥 于 2014-8-27 11:06 编辑

第一次写argument，先写在本子上然后输入电脑，断断续续写了大概1.5h:L:L
字数417词。不太会用模板，希望大家给点意见哈，我也会积极主动的来膜拜各位的大作，谢谢

我自己重新修改了一下，据说应该贴文档比较好，577词。


题目：
          Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern havepreviously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoricvillage of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by thePalean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a " Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River fromPalea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleanscould have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

      Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argumentand explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.



dolcevita 发表于 2014-8-27 09:02:14

还有文中只是说palean basket 和Lithos basket类似，但并没有说是完全一样的

懒得哥 发表于 2014-8-27 11:11:30

dolcevita 发表于 2014-8-27 09:02 static/image/common/back.gif
还有文中只是说palean basket 和Lithos basket类似，但并没有说是完全一样的

嗯，谢谢你的回复。
一开始我就打算这样写：两个地方可能环境差不多，分别独立制作了这种basket。
但是有点拿不准是不是自己意思没理解对，就没往上写。

sherry_luo 发表于 2014-8-27 22:54:55


懒得哥 发表于 2014-8-28 17:58:50

sherry_luo 发表于 2014-8-27 22:54 static/image/common/back.gif


谢谢版主，
请教一下版主有木有什么好的方法收集example，感觉我argu和issue都完全写不出 好的example:mad:

sherry_luo 发表于 2014-8-29 10:25:19

懒得哥 发表于 2014-8-28 17:58 static/image/common/back.gif
谢谢版主，
请教一下版主有木有什么好的方法收集example，感觉我argu和issue都完全写不出 好的example:m ...

我也木有看什么example
不过版内有一些素材的帖子 比如杂志什么的 可以参考一下~
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