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2. 让步 ①If one takes a very narrow definition of "progress" and "the condition of humanity" as elimination of death, war, violence and poverty, then perhaps it could be fairly stated that humankind has not made much improvement over the past one hundred years. Millions of people worldwide still live in poverty. Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome (AIDS) is killing millions of people with no cure in sight. War and violence continues in the Middle East, Africa and Afghanistan.
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直接攻击它列出的 poverty ,violent, war 对于贫穷(eliminate) factories, company, institution provide countless of jobs , besides we product more food and get more revenue from merchandisers and companies improve the welfare of people 失业金等 ; 对于 prevent violent , police use DNA and fingerprint to help identify persons, and scan photos into computer which assist policeman to deal with case( recognize murder), in a respect , prevent happening of some crime; 对于 nonexistence of global wars such as World War I and II thought still present .
4. 注意对humanity 的理解 :进一步论证 improve overall condition of humanity 包括首先 A humane characteristic, attribute, or act态度 行为: technology widen their ken , to some extends, their attribute toward nature , world are totally different from ancestors, more practical eyes sign to see and observe this society , less foolhardy有勇无谋的 behaviors which destroy nature resource unsustainable( without mercy) 其次 The quality of being humane benevolence 对弱、老的帮助与同情 知识, civilization :plenty of people get formal education , they know more themselves and have sympathy toward weak or poor one. respecting older and helping children are prevailing ,more and more people devote their soul and energy to, ICRC,volunteer 红十字会，志愿者，慈善家 philanthropist 再者 Those branches of knowledge, such as philosophy, literature, and art, which are concerned with human thought and culture; the liberal arts.各种学科发展 arts, science 等重点说一下arts.
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