issue范文分析一
"Wisdom is rightfully attributed not to people who know what to look for in life but to people who know what to overlook."关键词 wisdom， overlook
The quotation is certainly correct, insofar as it describes at least an element of wisdom. In other words, I do agree with the proposition, subject to the proviso that the achievement of wisdom may well also involve other traits or attributes.
第一个层面，生活中很多不开心的事情我们都应该overlook才是wisdom
Having qualified my answer somewhat, I must endorse the principles put forth in the quotation. Overlooking -- or, perhaps, forgetting -- is a crucial skill one needs to master in order to navigate the often-treacherous paths of life without undue torment. 根据题目的方向给overlook下个定义 From my own experience, and from observations of friends, family members and business associates，从身边的人说起，反面证明，如果我们不会这样会。。。推论出一个结论 I am well aware of the pitfalls which await those who fail to overlook the petty, the unnecessary and the irrelevant.
In modern America, as it happens, the importance of overlooking is probably greater than ever before. Even a person trying to lead a quiet, simple life encounters an endless stream of annoyances, errors and petty demands从极端的角度说overlook的可行性，就算一个人想过平静的生活，可以还是会碰到一些烦心事。 such as paperwork, filing numbers and taxes; long lines at the bank; exponentially aggravating traffic jams and sullen, uncooperative coworkers and neighbors.举例子 Those of us who cannot overlook such annoyances will invariably succumb to self-defeating dismay. 反正证明，如果我们不这样会导致。。。。
第二个层面，懂得取舍的人才是人生的一种智慧，如果没有取舍的人是一个没有底线的人，不懂如何取舍的人会舍去重要的东西
The ability to overlook also reflects a healthy sense of proportion and priorities. 主题句点明观点 The wise "overlooker" will ignore his or her spouse's failings after making a considered judgment that these are outweighed, in the long run, by greater and more significant strengths.举例子 for example, what wise or reasonable person would destroy a marriage solely because an otherwise faithful, kind, generous, intelligent and prosperous partner occasionally tosses socks on the floor? 反问句来展开上面说的现象，（如何展开，比如通过一些细节tosses socks on the floor来解释spouse's failings）
An elderly aunt of mine makes a striking example. 另外一个反面例子来证明不懂得取舍造成她不知道人生中最重要的事情不是抱怨而且找人生更有意义的事情Long widowed, she now spends her days sitting in her apartment, carping endlessly about the many relatives who have slighted her. Nobody calls enough. Nobody pays her any attention. Nobody cares, she says. And, indeed, why should they? Who wants to visit with someone, elderly or otherwise, who does nothing but complain, find fault and scour for slights? Were she wiser, perhaps she would ignore or even suppress her interminable grievances and take more interest in the world at large, including the very individuals whose attention she purportedly craves.这个反面例子从说明aunt不明智花那么多时间在小事上面在抱怨上面，她应该忽略这些interminable grievances，放心思在更多有有意义的事情上面The paradigm of overlooking applies with equal force in the worlds of business and politics. (领域)用到了政治和商业领域Look at Richard Nixon: a brilliant, often original thinker, he was nonetheless continually obsessed with minutiae and the unimportant. On some level, I'm sure, he himself realized the dramatic impact of such a glaring character flaw; when the situation was long past salvaging, he exhorted his staff and friends to "Never be petty," a dictum he honored far more in the breach than in the observance说明尼克松懂得取舍，尽管他会obsessed with minutiae and the unimportant，但是on some level ,他还是会认识到never be petty.
到个人领域做个总结More prosaically, in business and everyday life, it is indeed the wise person who overlooks or ignores a vast amount. Why come home every day nurturing a grudge? Why spend time grappling with activities, people or attitudes which bring nothing but pain and torment? 问句的形式举例子 Still, most of us do, at least somewhat, and find ourselves far diminished for it.
In sum, I think it's safe to say that much in this world merits not even a cursory examination, and those among us are wiser and happier who can successfully budget their time and energy in order to avoid negativity.
由于复制上来的很多地方标记的彩色没有显示出来，所以上传word，欢迎大家观看 这不是题库里的题目 而且木有写作指引;d: 好的。谢谢老师指点，不过我只是分析下文章作者如何展开的。还有写作指引老师指的是提纲么 水果的夏天 发表于 2015-1-17 10:33 static/image/common/back.gif
好的。谢谢老师指点，不过我只是分析下文章作者如何展开的。还有写作指引老师指的是提纲么
目前issue有6种不同的写作要求
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这篇文章作为延展阅读也挺不错 tesolchina 发表于 2015-1-16 22:59 static/image/common/back.gif
目前issue有6种不同的写作要求
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好的，谢谢老师
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