zysxgz0515 发表于 2015-6-19 22:33:51

argument3，请多指教，帮我批改一下，我也帮你批改

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无极仙道 发表于 2015-8-13 21:41:22

The first sentence of the  second paragraphmight as well be presented as { it is because of the of skateboard users' number ...}
I think the main problem of your essay is that you just point out the defection of the speakers' reasoning ,but fail to explain the probable improvement.

This is my essay,please take a glance and your advice would be appreciated.
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https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=1871809&fromuid=3592856

dgvwser 发表于 2015-8-15 01:46:39

谢谢分享
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