tesolchina 发表于 2016-1-8 20:31:46

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请在回帖中指出以下句子中的错误的类型并尝试修改。请不要为了看隐藏内容而做无意义的回复,谢谢。

句子 1  This reminds me, I appear different in different places, too.

句子 2  For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.



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<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型(如果不知道就填不知道)</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>


雪儿_Cindy 发表于 2016-1-20 20:10:52

<error_type>句内主语不一致, 多句混合入单句</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

Catherine_hope 发表于 2016-1-20 20:11:32

<error_type>两个句子合在了一起</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

verne91 发表于 2016-1-20 20:12:19

<error_type>不是一句话</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

Twinkle39 发表于 2016-1-20 20:12:31

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me, I appear differently in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, people who settle down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decreases gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction>

who-knows 发表于 2016-1-20 20:12:47

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

clarawho 发表于 2016-1-20 20:13:12

xsp1996 发表于 2016-1-20 20:13:23

<error_type>缺少连接词</error_type>
<correction.s1> This reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

gardenia22 发表于 2016-1-20 20:13:41

<error_type>一句话包含多个主谓</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I also appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary and is the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is occupied more and more by human.</correction>


本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2016-1-20 15:07 编辑


请在回帖中指出以下句子中的错误的类型并尝试修改。请不要为了看隐藏内容而做无意义的回复,谢谢。

句子 1  This reminds me, I appear different in different places, too.

句子 2  For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.

cyanchow 发表于 2016-1-20 20:13:43

<error_type>主从句关系,连接代词</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that  I appear different in different places ,too.
</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive.If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction>

wz1342322 发表于 2016-1-20 20:13:44

<error_type>时态错误</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me, I appeared different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must search for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

shuliang123 发表于 2016-1-20 20:14:14

this thing reminded me that I appear to be different in different places.

天天羊言 发表于 2016-1-20 20:14:56

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>It also reminds me that I would appear differently in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settlying down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only suitable food for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more more occupied by human.</correction>

hao0080 发表于 2016-1-20 20:15:16

<error_type>不知道</error_type>

PRICH 发表于 2016-1-20 20:15:40

<error_type> </error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me of the fact that I appear different in different places too</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down on the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain kind of food that is vital for human is  the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.
</correction>
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