coffeegirl 发表于 2004-8-11 23:43:28

[分享]一个PROF自己写的陶瓷信。

这封EMAIL是当时拿到AD后这个看中我的导师写给我的“模板”,让我寄给DIRECTOR去套系里钱的,也算是陶瓷吧:)
Dear Dr.***:

My name is **. I am very interested in studying communication in the United States.  One of your colleague, Dr. ***, suggested that I consider graduate study at UNI OF ***.

I understand that UNI OF *** has a new but growing MA program, and that there are now over 50 enrollees as I type.  I am very excited about this type of growth.  Also, I understand that your department has one of the finest new quantitative research programs in the area of communication.  I would especially be interested in studying under such individuals such as yourself。I have always had high standards for my academic work and understand that the MA faculty at UNI OF *** has an excellent reputation for pushing their students to do their very best.  I also understand that as I type, two excellent new faculty members are being interviewed who could participate in your growing program.  (此段是表达对学校的了解,依学校情况不同)

I am confident that I will be accepted for admission, but in today's world I would need to have assurances of financial support in order to study in the United States since otherwise, receiving a visa is nearly impossible.  Do you currently have any assistantships available?  Also, do you know of any fellowship or scholarship programs that might help foreign students, including the Center for International Studies on your campus?  I understand that the CIS does have programs with China, and I wonder if any of those could help me. (要钱)

I would offer three major strengths that would help your MA program (自己的强项)

一些非常有用的建议:



.(在信的最后问几个问题表示你对此DEPT严重感兴趣)

paisley 发表于 2004-8-12 00:00:36

谢谢coffegirl分享!

不过大家不要一窝蜂都用这个啊,不然真的又成摸班了,就失去作用了.

huangjin_suzhou 发表于 2004-8-12 04:08:01

that is  a good article

Daj 发表于 2004-8-12 05:45:44

最初由 paisley 发布
谢谢coffegirl分享!

不过大家不要一窝蜂都用这个啊,不然真的又成摸班了,就失去作用了.

that is the point !!!

teddybear 发表于 2004-8-12 13:07:57

不知道美国的大学要有多少人看多少个同样的这样的信了。

建议大家还是原创。交流用心,就不会太困难的。

Smile111 发表于 2004-8-13 12:23:14

Thanks very much for your sharing: )

kitty-w00 发表于 2004-8-13 12:51:29

Coffeegirl   在COMMUNICATION 长长的讨论中认识了你 :) 谢谢你的建议 我也是文科的 申请05年的 方向 教育  希望以后还会在飞跃看到你的大作:)

gt_ren 发表于 2004-8-13 18:00:19

谢谢

schyu 发表于 2005-5-10 15:41:13

hao

ryan 发表于 2005-5-10 15:46:56

good

syd 发表于 2005-5-10 16:55:44

领略它内在的精神,然后DIY.

mayyang 发表于 2005-5-10 19:51:00

呵呵

我觉得还是自己写比较好

cymcym0404 发表于 2005-6-11 21:12:08

great!
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