你9月2日的没给我批。。。。 ?6 {; W- `9 | ( D8 c7 Z l% z- j9 s" z It is no doubt that elder (older) friends have more experience and young friends have more creative ideas. So whose advice do you prefer to take? It is a thorny issue for someone because usually you cannot predict what will happen after you make (making)an important decision. In my opinion, however, the answer of the question is that it should depend on different circumstances.5 e8 @9 w! j1 N# p0 {; |. |: h$ Z1 b7 z5 N) E8 Q/ @+ l7 m9 V 5 I* i* F* D0 d! f" L- N" H problems (people are confronted with删) are mostly related to experience or conventional,(没必要拉那么长) then it is better to take elder friends' advice. For instance, suppose(supposing) that you will hold a traditional wedding ceremony, you definitely(should) ask (take) suggestions from your elder friends because of the experience possessed by them. In contrast, if you take advice from young people, maybe that will destroy the atmosphere of the traditional wedding for the cause of the lack of related experience. Hence, for those issues such as traditional culture, marriage and life experience, elder friends' advices are more valuable. ' {/ Q% F/ [, s' F5 L On the other hand, when people turn to friends for help about the problems on the topic of modern technology or lifestyle, they mostly should be aware of the opinions from young friends(知道建议?应该是采取吧) because old methods usually do not work well at(in) this situation. For example, you want to build up a personal business website to sale your products. It is not surprising that elder people know less about the information technology for that cause of rapidly development of technology and the old ways they prefer.(不懂) Mostly young people can provide some brilliant ideas for you to grab more attentions from customers. So, for the cases which need more creative and new suggestions, young friends' advice should be attached more significance.4 z% H5 W0 V9 p q0 c# t In conclusion, under most circumstances, young friends' advices are more fresh and risky and elder friends' advices are more conventional and thoughtful. (前面都还在平衡,这句的倾向却很明显,不妥) Therefore, facing different issues, people should put more value on the advice which can really help them out depending on different conditions.& h( } I. Z% R0 n 总体有点觉得唠叨,没那么顺畅,有些句子其实可以写的很简单,感觉估计加一些可以不要的东西,concise一些,别老用for the cause of 蓝色是fancy改的。 文章中有好几句“什么什么for the because of/ for the cause of”, 感觉是在脑子用中文句式想好后,再译成英文句子。 而且这样句子一长,就容易出错,或写的不清楚,如ls那位说看不懂的地方,试着在要用从句的地方断句。 |
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