Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher who is a serious and strict person is more effective than a teacher is humor and is easy going person?
When it comes to the question that whether a teacher who is serious and strict is more effective than a humorous and easy going teacher, different people have different views. Some people may support that a teacher who is strict is more effective, while others, however, would hold the opinion that a teacher with humor is more effective. As far as I am concerned, I advocate the former one, and my arguments are presented as follows.
To begin with, one of the main reasons for my propensity is that a teacher who is a serious and strict person will help us develop a good habit for study. With good habits, we can learn more efficient and more effective in the class. Take my teacher Dr. Zhang Yan as an example, he is a serious person and also he is quite strict with us in class. In his class, we have to pay highly attention in order to catch up with his pace without missing any important points. After class, we feel tired, but we all own a sense of satisfaction because we have obtained a huge amount of knowledge during his class. Therefore, as you can see, he is more effective than the teachers who often disturb the class to tell some jokes in order to let us relax.
Furthermore, a strict and serious teacher may have a logical way of thinking, and he or she will do everything in order, which will definitely improve his or her efficiency. For instance, my mother is a teacher, and she is strict with not only me but also her students. She does housework in her order, and she puts the right thing in the right place, which makes everything easy to be found next time when we want to use. Thanks to her orderly arrangement, our work and study becomes quite effective and efficient .More importantly, our time is saved which enable us to do other significant things. Compared with serious and strict teachers, humorous and easy going teachers may not do things in such logical way as my mother does. In conclusion, their characteristics make them less effective than my mother with such strict and serious merits.
To sum up, from what I have discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that serious and strict teachers are more effective than humorous teachers, owning to their good habits, and they can also influence others on having the same merits. 作者: linuxcodehit 时间: 2010-1-28 16:17:49
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+ w Q1 G7 A1 q1 ?: f LFurthermore, a strict and serious teacher may have a logical way of thinking, and he or she will do everything in order, which will definitely improve his or her efficiency. For instance, my mother is a teacher, and she is strict with not only me but also her students. She does housework in her order, and she puts the right thing in the right place, which makes everything easy to be found next time when we want to use. Thanks to her orderly arrangement, our work and study becomes quite effective and efficient .More importantly, our time is saved which enable us to do other significant things. Compared with serious and strict teachers, humorous and easy going teachers may not do things in such logical way as my mother does. In conclusion, their characteristics make them less effective than my mother with such strict and serious merits.
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|" X! U3 b0 c5 PTo sum up, from what I have discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that serious and strict teachers are more effective than humorous teachers, owning to their good habits, and they can also influence others on having the same merits.
就改了前一段……都是我个人的意见。我觉得文章首段的模板太严重。可以才尝试修改一下。另外注意下词性。整体来说我觉得挺好的。例子举得挺有托福的风格的。加油~~~作者: tbs2010 时间: 2010-1-29 10:28:39