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标题: IBT特训营 Nathan的TOEFL四战备考规划监督贴 [打印本页]

作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-20 22:24:56     标题: IBT特训营 Nathan的TOEFL四战备考规划监督贴

本帖最后由 nathanyc 于 2010-3-10 22:12 编辑

都结束了...让帖子沉了吧
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-20 22:28:19

沙发,呵呵~~加油~~~
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-20 22:30:06

今晚就从无老师Toefl词汇开始,每天争取汇报一次...
作者: 素怿    时间: 2010-2-20 22:30:07

nathan加油~~~
03果然是在论坛出现得更多。。。
作者: beverly910614    时间: 2010-2-20 22:30:12

加油 板凳吧~沾点仙气~~~

呀。。5楼了。。
作者: 半夏之北    时间: 2010-2-20 22:30:41

加油加油~~~
作者: wuqian0801    时间: 2010-2-20 22:35:50

也许四站是为了让你取得一个最漂亮的成绩.. nathan加油...
作者: morning8427    时间: 2010-2-20 22:36:21

顶 nathan,加油。
作者: 名字是个词儿    时间: 2010-2-20 23:16:32

顶毅力,加油。
作者: 我是chineselady    时间: 2010-2-20 23:25:34

加油啊 来晚了
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-20 23:53:56

2.20晚
无老师Toefl词汇只看到第6页,不过发现但此后面的句子比较不错
就当训练难句了,看不懂的反复读的,不过到底两周没碰TOEFL了,感觉都快没了
Anyway, 恢复考试状态,每天睡前一集Friends,早睡早起
作者: hulinlin24    时间: 2010-2-21 00:26:20

nathan。。。我们一起努力
+U。。。你一定能考到理想分数的
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-21 10:53:43

好吧,今天看长难句,被S冠以鸠摩智的称呼,晕~~~至少鸠摩智很强的啊。
然后写作文提纲~~~
有时间就跟读吧
背单词,今天list11~15
作者: hulinlin24    时间: 2010-2-21 10:56:30

33的计划怎么又发到小N这里来了?
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-21 11:52:39

2.11上午

今天早上蛮悲壮的...
三篇TPO10的阅读用S大的截图做的,好像我这里阳光比较强,照片比较暗...还要放大图片不停用笔记本的触摸板拖啊拖,移来移去...
就这样三篇文章搞了一个半小时才做完...
终于知道自己之前用word做阅读时多水了,更别提一战是打印出来做的...:L
哎,
第一篇用时36min
第二篇用时21min
第三篇用时25min
呵呵,估计一两天适应了时间就不会超了...
Anyway,下午一定要总结...否则真的是白做了
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-21 12:09:51

14# hulinlin24

我确实发现我发错帖子了.......Nathan对不起了,俺眼花了~~~~
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-21 15:41:22

本帖最后由 nathanyc 于 2010-2-21 23:06 编辑

2.21 Independent Writing

384 words/29min(已修改拼写和语法错误)

Teachers should not show their political or social views known in the classroom

The issue at hand is whether teachers should show their view concerning political and social affairs to the students. There is no doubt that such issue will inevitably spark a heated discussion for people have their own unique experiences and angles. While I concede there may certain advantage for teachers to show such views, nonetheless, I am inclining to agree with the following statement.


To begin with, as the classroom is mainly for academic discussion and teaching, such point of view will undoubtedly distract the attentions of students from focusing on acquiring knowledge on their professional subjects. To put it another way, even the view shown by the teachers about the politics and society is accurate and appropriate, the classroom is still not a suitable place for them to speak out such standpoints. Perhaps students will discuss those affairs during their class and chatting with each other on these topics. To make things worse, they may probably lose their interest in their major academic studies and shift their attention on these issues.


Furthermore, if the foregoing assumption was being cast doubt on, namely teachers have somewhat negative inclinations through their expression of political or social affairs; it will mislead the students to inappropriate situations. The following example may aptly illustrate my point. Suppose a teacher is not satisfied with the current political leaders, so she gives a negative evaluation of the leader in the classroom. After that, the students got the first bed impression of the leader and they formulate their own evaluation criteria based on these misleading views. It is entirely possible that they will keep such biased ideas when they grow up and start to apply them into their practical speech or articles. Even worse they may teach their own children such viewpoint. If such circle continues, the results will turn out to a moral disaster.


Admittedly, certain and appropriate comment on the current political or social issues may have the students to keep in touch with the rapid pace of modern society to some extent, nevertheless, the superficial merits cannot hide the potential detriment due to various unexpected factors.


As far as I am concerned, we can safely draw the conclusion that it would be a bad idea for teachers to express their views about the politics or society to students.

附上word版本,方便修改(~ o ~)~zZ
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-21 15:44:35

Sigh! 今天听力没做,只做了阅读和写作...
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-21 15:45:14

先把做的分析了再管听力...恩,一个脚印一个脚印地走
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-21 23:08:59

晚上什么都不想做...搞完阅读的纠错,Sigh...之前错的依旧错
今天权当恢复状态了...听力明天要跟进了,否则又要杯具了

今天无老师TOEFL单词LIST1过完才许睡觉
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-22 08:29:57

Nathan加油~~~今天03发现昨晚饱睡以后,今早精神焕发,吼吼~~~感到全身鸡血沸腾。
作者: lavenderelaine    时间: 2010-2-22 16:40:07

强度好大啊…… 加油。:handshake
借鉴了~
作者: clisalong    时间: 2010-2-22 17:26:39

2\21 作文修改---Nicole
请看附件
作者: clisalong    时间: 2010-2-22 17:27:49

加油哦,看得出来,你比我勤奋多了。。
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-22 17:54:09


应该确切是中午做了TPO11的三篇阅读,几乎米有超时...下午改了小组的作文,录了TPO11的口语,其他
哎,看了俩集Friends...笔记本就这点娱乐的东西,Nathan该打...跟读去了
晚上总结TPO阅读和背单词,考试日期不到,就不能停下
作者: beverly910614    时间: 2010-2-22 17:55:24

:handshake 加油~~~
我明天新计划~~好兴奋~~~!!!
我要提高英语实力~~~!
嘻嘻
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-22 20:56:46

小睡了半个多小时,又有精神了,继续革命
作者: 半夏之北    时间: 2010-2-22 21:34:03

The issue at hand is whether teachers should show their view concerning political and social affairs to the students. There is no doubt that such issues will inevitably spark a heated discussion for people have their own unique experiences and angles. While I concede there may certain advantages for teachers to show such views, nonetheless, I am inclining to agree with the following statement.

To begin with, as the classroom is mainly for academic discussion and teaching, such point of view will undoubtedly distract the attentions of students from focusing on acquiring knowledge on their professional subjects. To put it another way, even the view shown by the teachers about the politics and society is accurate and appropriate, the classroom is still not a suitable place for them to speak out such standpoints. Perhaps students will discuss those affairs during their class and chatting with each other on these topics. To make things worse, they may probably lose their interest in their major academic studies and shift their attention on(to) these issues. 可以再有点details

Furthermore, if the foregoing assumption was being cast doubt on, namely teachers have somewhat negative inclinations through their expression of political or social affairs; it will mislead the students to inappropriate situations. The following example may aptly illustrate my point. Suppose a teacher is not satisfied with the current political leaders, so she gives a negative evaluation of the leader in the classroom. After that, the students got the first bed impression of the leader and they formulate their own evaluation criteria based on these misleading views. It is entirely possible that they will keep such biased ideas when they grow up and start to apply them into their practical speech or articles. Even worse they may teach their own children such viewpoint. If such circle continues, the results will turn out to a moral disaster.  

Admittedly, certain and appropriate comment on the current political or social issues may have(enable?) the students to keep in touch with the rapid pace of modern society to some extent, nevertheless, the superficial merits cannot hide the potential detriment due to various unexpected factors.

As far as I am concerned, we can safely draw the conclusion that it would be a bad idea for teachers to express their views about the politics or society to students.

不好意思给你评晚了,nathan的结构和我的一样啊,注意以下单复数,没有什么大问题,可以在细节一点
加油啊~~~
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-22 22:33:29

Nathan  2.22独立作文

For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities?

The issue at hand is whether the government should spend more money on education for young children than in university. Undoubtedly it will trigger a severe hated debate on such controversial issue due to various angles and experiences of individuals. While I concede that the education of children is important to some extent, nevertheless, the college education should be put on the first place among those two things.

To begin with, I hold the view that the college education requires much more funds and investment for students to perfect experiment facilities for student to do academic research. While for children, there hardly needs such investments. To put it another way, their requirement are not the complex and diversified compared with college. Furthermore, college may need to invest on some Co-operation programs to facilitate their student better prepared for the future job hunting. According to a survey on the budget of Research-oriented Universities in our nation, three quarters among them have deficits which caused by the ever-increasing improvement of better teaching environment.

Furthermore, compared with investment on college education, spending money on the education of young children may have several unexpected drawbacks. No one can deny the childhood is the most precious time free of pressure and full of joy and happiness. Suppose we provide perfect education facilities to educate them, it will take up plenty of time on the study or courses which are still profound for them. It will undoubtedly severe impacts their proper development both physically and psychologically. We should let them grow in a much nature environment. Thus, investment on children education will not only be nearly impossible to achieve its final goals and expected values, but also puts heavy burden on the young children.

Thus, as far as I am concerned, government should place the college education on a relatively critical position when spending money when compared with children education.
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-23 08:48:21

今天早上起得还不算迟...Check下邮箱,O(∩_∩)O~
早上先听力跟读,接着TPO9阅读,然后口语brain storm
顺便等DHL的Official Admission Letter
哇咔咔,对面这几天装修,我氧化钙啊
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-23 08:49:52

nathan 加油~~~辛苦了~~~
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-23 10:32:20

吼吼...TPO9阅读搞定,再嘈杂的装修声中做完的...
经过2天的适应期,速度已经提上来了...三篇每篇所花时间在13min-18min不等
去操场搞定口语和单词
一会回来报告
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-23 12:28:05

额,听读完吃午饭...今天天气不错,话说感觉冬天刚过就是夏天,果然只有两季啊
作者: qz163z    时间: 2010-2-23 13:02:56

亲爱的我发现你口语有个硬伤。昨晚听你口语发现你说[s]的发音的时候总是很重,清辅音清辅音就是要轻轻的发。你不但浊化还盖住了其他的音,比如first你自己再好好揣摩下下,这个对你口语影响不小如果你要高分的话
作者: 我是chineselady    时间: 2010-2-23 13:05:15

;P;P 叫谁亲爱的呢。。
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-23 13:43:03

...改不了了╮(╯▽╰)╭
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-23 13:45:15

额,评完口语,搞完听读,吃饭去了...
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-23 15:49:23

无老师单词书LIST1-LIST2复习完,去睡会觉...
晚上LIST3-LIST4争取三天把155页的单词书过完...
Waiting for DHL...:hug:
作者: showgood07    时间: 2010-2-23 19:47:46

童鞋,作文评价,是往这里贴吗?
作者: showgood07    时间: 2010-2-23 19:48:56

The issue at hand is whether the government should spend more money on education for young children than in[这个应该多余了] university. Undoubtedly it will trigger a severe hated debate on[这个…语气太过于激烈了吧] such controversial issue due to various angles[从不同的角度,我不确定可不可以这样表达,我也想过,但是没敢用,写了aspect] and experiences of individuals. While I concede that the education of children is important to some extent, nevertheless, the college education should be put on the first place among those two things.

To begin with, I hold the view that the college education requires much more funds and investment for students to perfect experiment facilities for student to do academic research. While for children, there hardly needs such investments. To put it another way, their requirement are not the complex and diversified compared[没明白] with college. Furthermore, college may need to invest on some Co-operation programs to facilitate their student better prepared for the future job hunting. According to a survey on the budget of Research-oriented Universities in our nation, three quarters among them have deficits which caused by the ever-increasing improvement of better teaching environment.

Furthermore, compared with investment on college education, spending money on the education of young children may have several unexpected drawbacks. No one can deny the childhood is the most precious time free of pressure and full of joy and happiness. Suppose we provide perfect education facilities to educate them, it will take up plenty of time on the study or courses which are still profound for them. It will undoubtedly severe impacts their proper development both physically and psychologically. We should let them grow in a much nature environment. Thus, investment on children education will not only be nearly impossible to achieve its final goals and expected values, but also puts heavy burden on the young children[这个结论有点……].

Thus, as far as I am concerned, government should place the college education on a relatively critical position when spending money when compared with children education.

文章把握得很好,语言很精练,主要意思表达出来了,有些细节要注意,而且个人意见,必要时,还是不要过于流露强烈的情感。呵呵
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-24 01:23:38

今天任务搞不完了,明天LIST4单词
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-24 02:31:20

Nathan加油~~~现在应该呼呼做着美国梦呢~~~呵呵~~~好梦
明早我要比你早起,吼吼~~~~现在我也去睡觉
作者: hulinlin24    时间: 2010-2-24 12:04:44

今天小N米有起来么?咋米见更新呐?
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-24 13:42:10

囧,那个懒虫,不会是昨天学习太兴奋,今天就睡到现在还.......
作者: hulinlin24    时间: 2010-2-24 13:44:26

= =#那就是昏睡了。。。。估计被人打晕了
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-24 15:23:21

45# hulinlin24
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-24 15:23:48

44# happyfaith2008
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-24 15:48:30

把今天失去的时间补回来!
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-24 16:12:43

nathan才是超级大水瓜,这明明是个水窝嘛~~~~
作者: rjyuu    时间: 2010-2-24 19:00:51

49# happyfaith2008
Nathan加油~~呼呼
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-24 22:05:35

看来阅读还是依旧杯具
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-2-25 00:47:51

Nathan加油~~~好人好梦~~~~agreeable melancholious~~~~帮你默念四战成功
PS:明天要加油啊~~~阅读要全对吖~~~啊哈哈
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-25 16:34:34

TPO14三篇错了8个...囧
居然有好几个是词汇题,不能容忍
作者: rjyuu    时间: 2010-2-25 18:18:45

补批改的作文
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-27 15:29:30

今天回学校了...真的要开始继续孤单了

下午去湖边练了口语,哎,还是蛮不错的,毕竟算一个自己的专属的复习场所。
但是从家来学校整理东西啥的有点小累。

Anyway, hold on man, if I keep trying I will ultimately capable making it.
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-2-27 18:21:22

2.27 Nathan独立写作
作者: by19900610hnyt    时间: 2010-2-28 19:47:57

提示: 作者被禁止或删除 内容自动屏蔽
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-3-1 14:12:01

2.28 Nathan独立作文
不好意思交迟了,批改的同学辛苦了
作者: mjsnoopy    时间: 2010-3-1 14:43:47

Nathan加油~~~
作者: mjsnoopy    时间: 2010-3-1 14:44:09

为你的最后一句话加油~~~呵呵~
作者: amanda_qinyy    时间: 2010-3-1 17:36:33

Nathan 你太粗心啦,都忘记加链接在主贴,还好我从你以前的作文那里找了过来。。。

嗯,改好啦,看附件吧!
作者: glly7    时间: 2010-3-2 00:03:00

2.28 by 小伙子
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-3-2 23:59:05

Nathan 3.2作文
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-3-3 00:01:36

今日事今日毕...说到做到岂非易事
作者: 我是chineselady    时间: 2010-3-3 00:15:56

小心加油
作者: 小心littleheart    时间: 2010-3-3 12:50:28

[attach]140165[/attach]
作者: hulinlin24    时间: 2010-3-3 16:55:58

小N加油
作者: clisalong    时间: 2010-3-3 17:47:09

本帖最后由 clisalong 于 2010-3-3 17:49 编辑

3、2 作文修改

看得出,楼主的模板已经很成熟了。。。
没啥好修改的。。
见附件:
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-3-3 20:18:05

为什么大家都觉得我没走题,我觉得自己走题了呢
作者: beverly910614    时间: 2010-3-4 10:15:25

当局者迷 旁观者清。
加油~~!
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-3-5 10:15:17

估计让03看看,你就会走题了,嘿嘿,我一直都是带刀见见人的~~
Nathan,四战啊,加油啊~~~
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-3-5 21:56:21

...明天就上战场了...这段时间确实动力不算很足,也有不少其他的干扰,但既然自己一直没有放弃,就像灌篮高手里说的那样:一旦放弃了,比赛就结束了...

Never quit!
作者: snowman0427    时间: 2010-3-5 22:16:20

我也来顶下~~共勉!!!!!!!!!
作者: fatrui    时间: 2010-3-5 23:09:22

Nathan 加油啊!~
作者: 我是chineselady    时间: 2010-3-6 00:51:29

等你好消息了:D
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-3-6 09:30:25

同等好消息~~~呵呵
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-3-6 14:04:25


时间确实仓促,尽力了,考得有些生气...
淡定淡定
作者: happyfaith2008    时间: 2010-3-6 14:34:27

77# nathanyc

nathan,尽力了就好,呵呵~~这下也算全部结束了。
作者: nathanyc    时间: 2010-3-6 15:19:15

78# happyfaith2008
感谢03,翠花,狐狸等IBT特训营童鞋们的鼓励和支持...
作者: hulinlin24    时间: 2010-3-6 16:25:24

78# happyfaith2008  
感谢03,翠花,狐狸等IBT特训营童鞋们的鼓励和支持...
nathanyc 发表于 2010-3-6 15:19


摸摸。。。。。记得爆PP。。XDDDDDD




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