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作者: raysun77    时间: 2010-7-7 17:05:05     标题: ISSUE36+argument10 欢迎拍文修改小组 提纲帖

本帖最后由 raysun77 于 2010-7-8 17:25 编辑

issue 36"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries."

1. In some fields, especially within the scientific research field, greatness of individual is can be usually decided only by the followers.
2. Concerning the arts and literature, the greatness lies in their enduring influence to those of later generations.
3. . In the realm of business, in some cases great achievement is recognizable immediately, while in other cases it is not.



argument 10


The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a Batavia newspaper.

“The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time period, however, the price of milk at the local Excello Food Market has increased from $1.50 to over $3.00 per gallon. To prevent farmers from continuing to receive excessive profits on an apparently increased supply of milk, the Batavia government should begin to regulate retail milk prices. Such regulation is necessary to ensure both lower prices and an adequate supply of milk for consumers.”




1. Such regulation is necessary to ensure lower price but not ensure the supply of milk for consumers.
2. The arguer conclusion depend on the questionable assumption that profites is entirly deticted by the supply
3. There are several factors that might undermine the profits. such as the cost, the price

作者: yanii    时间: 2010-7-8 06:46:22

issue提纲
观点清晰,只是可以再详细些哦,譬如要举的例子
argument
没看懂你第二点要反驳什么,请教一下
作者: raysun77    时间: 2010-7-8 11:12:14

2# yanii
第二点写的太简单一点,我是想说利润并不是只由supply决定的,供应量增加竞争激烈势必会导致单价的降低,所以利润并不一定会增加




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